Machine— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
What is your favourite machine in your home?
受験者
I think my favorite utensil in my home is the refrigerator, which protects the freshness of ingredients and nourishment, and additionally, it also prevents bacteria from growing, which means that I can store food for longer periods without worrying about spoilage.
試験官
Do you think washing machines and sweeping machines are important?
受験者
Yes, definitely. Washing machine and sweeping machine are truly important in my life because they can save my time and energy. So instead of using the amount of time to wash clothes or to clear away to my house manually, I can utilize these time to do other valuable things such as studying.
試験官
Do you read the instructions before using a machine?
受験者
Absolutely. I always read the instructions before using any machine. I still vividly remember when my mom purchased a washing machine. I used it without reading manual which cost it to breakdown. This incident taught me the importance of reading guidelines to avoid damage or problems.
試験官
Do you think it is important to read the instructions?
受験者
Yes, definitely. Reading the instructions is particularly important to ensure machines work properly and last longer, and additionally it can help us to avoid potential mistakes and problems.
評価
総合
Part 1
What is your favourite machine in your home?
スコア: 85.0提案: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tốt nhưng có thể cải thiện bằng cách sử dụng từ vựng tự nhiên hơn và tránh lặp từ. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời hơi dài và có thể ngắn gọn hơn để tự nhiên và hiệu quả hơn.
例: My favorite machine at home is the refrigerator because it keeps food fresh and prevents bacteria growth, allowing me to store food safely for longer periods.
Do you think washing machines and sweeping machines are important?
スコア: 80.0提案: Bạn nên chú ý đến ngữ pháp số nhiều và số ít (ví dụ: 'washing machines' thay vì 'washing machine'). Ngoài ra, câu trả lời có thể mạch lạc hơn nếu sử dụng liên từ phù hợp và tránh lặp từ.
例: Yes, washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because they save me a lot of time and energy. This allows me to focus on more valuable activities like studying.
Do you read the instructions before using a machine?
スコア: 90.0提案: Câu trả lời của bạn rất tốt với ví dụ cụ thể. Tuy nhiên, bạn nên chú ý đến cách dùng từ và ngữ pháp như 'used it without reading the manual, which caused it to break down'.
例: Absolutely. I always read the instructions before using any machine. For example, once I used a washing machine without reading the manual, which caused it to break down. Since then, I understand the importance of following guidelines to avoid problems.
Do you think it is important to read the instructions?
スコア: 88.0提案: Câu trả lời của bạn rõ ràng và mạch lạc. Tuy nhiên, bạn có thể sử dụng thêm liên từ để câu văn tự nhiên hơn và tránh lặp từ như 'and' nhiều lần.
例: Yes, definitely. Reading instructions is important because it helps machines work properly, extends their lifespan, and prevents potential mistakes or problems.
文法
× Washing machine and sweeping machine are truly important in my life because they can save my time and energy.
✓ Washing machines and sweeping machines are truly important in my life because they can save my time and energy.
The sentence refers to more than one washing machine and sweeping machine, so the plural form 'machines' should be used to match the subject and maintain subject-verb agreement.
× So instead of using the amount of time to wash clothes or to clear away to my house manually, I can utilize these time to do other valuable things such as studying.
✓ So instead of using the time to wash clothes or to clean my house manually, I can utilize this time to do other valuable things such as studying.
The phrase 'the amount of time' is awkward and 'these time' is incorrect because 'time' is uncountable and singular here. 'This time' is the correct singular form. Also, 'clear away to my house' is incorrect preposition usage; it should be 'clean my house'.
× So instead of using the amount of time to wash clothes or to clear away to my house manually, I can utilize these time to do other valuable things such as studying.
✓ So instead of using the time to wash clothes or to clean my house manually, I can utilize this time to do other valuable things such as studying.
The phrase 'clear away to my house' is incorrect. The correct preposition and verb combination is 'clean my house'. 'Clear away' is usually used with objects, not with a location like 'to my house'.
× I used it without reading manual which cost it to breakdown.
✓ I used it without reading the manual, which caused it to break down.
The sentence is missing the definite article 'the' before 'manual'. Also, 'cost it to breakdown' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'caused it to break down'. 'Break down' is a phrasal verb and should be two words.
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