Patience— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中语法和表达不够自然，句子结构混乱，建议简化句子并使用更自然的表达方式。

例: No, I am not a patient person. When I have to do time-consuming and boring tasks, I always want to finish them quickly.

提案: 回答内容较为简单，缺少连贯的连接词，建议使用连接词使表达更流畅，并丰富细节。

例: The thing that makes me feel impatient is working on my university thesis because it is very boring and time-consuming. I have to do a lot of research and translation, which can be quite tiring.

提案: 语法错误较多，表达不够清晰，建议注意时态和单复数的正确使用，并用连接词使句子更连贯。

例: When I start doing something time-consuming, I don't feel bored at first. However, after a few days, I find it quite boring and demanding.

提案: 表达较为清楚，但句子结构可以更自然，建议调整句子顺序并使用更地道的表达。

例: I am currently a student and don't have a job. However, my studies require me to be patient, especially when I spend time programming and learning new things.

提案: 句子结构混乱，表达不清晰，建议简化句子并使用正确的语法结构。

例: Yes, I am more patient now than when I was a child. When I was young, I couldn't tolerate boring activities like reading books or studying.

× When I made some time consuming and boring things also I always want to get rid of them.

✓ When I do some time-consuming and boring things, I always want to get rid of them.

这里的动作是经常发生的事情，应该使用一般现在时，而不是过去时。"made"是过去式，应该改为"do"。

× When I made some time consuming and boring things also I always want to get rid of them.

✓ When I do some time-consuming and boring things, I always want to get rid of them.

"time consuming"作为复合形容词，应该用连字符连接，变成"time-consuming"。

× OK, I would like to share the thesis in my university.

✓ OK, I would like to share my thesis at my university.

"share the thesis in my university"表达不自然，应该是"share my thesis at my university"，表示在大学分享自己的论文。

× OK, I would like to share the thesis in my university.

✓ OK, I would like to share my thesis at my university.

介词"in"用于表示位置时不太合适，通常说"at university"表示在大学。

× At that time I do a lot of research and translation.

✓ At that time I did a lot of research and translation.

"At that time"表示过去的时间点，动词应使用过去时，"do"应改为"did"。

× after a few day I think the scene is quite boring and demanding.

✓ after a few days I think the scene is quite boring and demanding.

"a few"后面应接复数名词，"day"应改为复数形式"days"。

× after a few day I think the scene is quite boring and demanding.

✓ after a few days I think the scene is quite boring and demanding.

"boring"和"demanding"作为形容词使用，描述"scene"，用法正确，无需改动。

× Currently I am still a student and I don't have a job, but my study requires me to be patient, especially spend time programming and starting new things.

✓ Currently I am still a student and I don't have a job, but my study requires me to be patient, especially spending time programming and starting new things.

动词后面接动名词形式，"especially spend"应改为"especially spending"。

× Saying yes when I was a child I couldn't bear everything that made me bored like the read books and do something like studying.

✓ Saying yes, when I was a child I couldn't bear everything that made me bored, like reading books and doing things like studying.

"like the read books"应改为"like reading books"，"do something like studying"应改为"doing things like studying"，动词应使用动名词形式。