Patience— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to give a clear and direct answer first, then explain with specific reasons. Avoid repetition and grammatical errors to make your answer more natural and effective.

例: Yes, I consider myself a patient person most of the time. However, I sometimes lose patience when things don't go as planned because I tend to be quite stubborn.

提案: Focus on giving a complete and clear answer. Use correct vocabulary and sentence structure. For example, say 'wait in long queues' instead of 'wet and long queues'. Also, explain why these situations make you impatient.

例: I often feel impatient when I have to wait in long queues or deal with complicated procedures because it wastes my time and causes frustration.

提案: It seems you misunderstood the question or did not answer it. Make sure to listen carefully and respond directly to the question asked.

例: When I have to do something for a long time, I usually feel tired but I try to stay focused to complete the task efficiently.

提案: Avoid laughing or giving irrelevant responses. Answer the question directly and provide reasons or examples if possible.

例: Yes, my job requires a lot of patience because I often have to deal with difficult customers and solve problems calmly.

提案: Try to structure your answer clearly. Start with a direct response, then explain with specific details. Avoid repetition and grammatical mistakes.

例: Yes, I am more patient now than when I was a child. As a child, I was quite stubborn and easily lost my patience, but with experience, I have learned to stay calm in difficult situations.

× Sometime I I lost my patience because I'm a stubborn person.

✓ Sometimes I lose my patience because I'm a stubborn person.

The word 'Sometime' should be 'Sometimes' to indicate frequency (plural). Also, 'lost' is past tense, but the sentence is about a habitual action, so present tense 'lose' is appropriate.

× I I often feel impatient when. When I have to wet and long queues and organise process.

✓ I often feel impatient when I have to wait in long queues and go through an organized process.

The sentence is fragmented and contains spelling errors ('wet' should be 'wait'). Also, 'organise process' is unclear; it should be 'go through an organized process' for clarity and correctness.

× How do you look?

✓ How do you feel?

The question 'How do you look?' is inappropriate in context; the examiner asked about feelings, so 'How do you feel?' is the correct form.

× Yes, I'm, I'm a, I'm a, I'm a adult person who I have a patient when I was a child, I am a stubborn person. I remember a stubborn person. So I lost my patience.

✓ Yes, I'm an adult person. When I was a child, I was patient, but I am a stubborn person. I remember being stubborn, so I used to lose my patience.

The original sentence is repetitive and ungrammatical. 'I'm a adult' should be 'I'm an adult'. The sentence structure is corrected to clearly express past and present states, and to use correct articles and verb forms.