Patience— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时语法错误较多，时态使用不准确，且表达不够自然。建议注意时态一致性，避免重复表达，并尝试用更地道的表达方式。

例: No, I don't think I am because I often feel nervous and anxious when I encounter problems, so I guess I'm not very patient.

提案: 回答不够清晰，表达含糊且语法错误较多。建议明确说明具体情境，并使用连词使句子更连贯。

例: I feel impatient when I face unexpected problems that need to be solved quickly because I want to fix them as soon as possible.

提案: 句子结构混乱，表达不流畅。建议简化句子结构，使用正确的介词和时态，并增加连贯性。

例: At first, I find it difficult, and because the task takes a long time, I often feel impatient while doing it.

提案: 回答内容丰富，但句子较长且重复“patient”。建议简化句子，避免重复，并使用更自然的表达。

例: Yes, as a college student, I need to be patient when completing assignments and working on group projects.

提案: 语法错误影响表达效果，如“to be succeed”应为“to succeed”。建议注意动词形式，表达更自然。

例: Yes, definitely. My parents always told me that if I want to succeed, I need to be more patient.

× No, I don't think so because I always feel nervous and anxious when I made some troubles, so maybe I'm not a patient person.

✓ No, I don't think so because I always feel nervous and anxious when I make some troubles, so maybe I'm not a patient person.

这里的时间是现在时态，描述的是经常发生的事情，所以应该用一般现在时的动词形式'make'，而不是过去式'made'。

× Sometimes maybe I made some troubles immediately or I need to solve them as soon as possible.

✓ Sometimes maybe I make some troubles immediately or I need to solve them as soon as possible.

这里描述的是经常发生的情况，应该使用一般现在时'make'，而不是过去式'made'。

× At first I always feel it's difficult but because it needs to for a long time so I always feel impatient during doing something.

✓ At first I always feel it's difficult because it needs to be done for a long time, so I always feel impatient when doing something.

'needs to for a long time'缺少动词，应该是'needs to be done for a long time'。另外，'during doing something'用法不正确，应该用'when doing something'。

× Yes, because I'm now a college student, so I need to be patient when I'm doing the job or finish my homework or even I need to do some something like group works, I need to be patient.

✓ Yes, because I'm now a college student, so I need to be patient when I'm doing the job or finishing my homework or even when I need to do something like group work, I need to be patient.

'finish my homework'前缺少介词，应该用动名词形式'finishing'。'some something'重复，应改为'something'。'group works'应为不可数名词'group work'。此外，连接词使用不当，需调整句子结构。

× My parents always tell me that I need to be patient more because if I want to be succeed, I need to be a patient person.

✓ My parents always tell me that I need to be more patient because if I want to succeed, I need to be a patient person.

'patient more'顺序错误，应该是'more patient'。'be succeed'错误，正确用法是'succeed'，不加'be'。