Patience— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用正确的时态和词汇。可以直接回答问题，然后用具体例子支持观点。

例: I am an average patient person. For example, I usually don't have much patience when washing dishes because it takes a long time.

提案: 回答不够清晰，语法和词汇使用错误较多。建议明确表达导致不耐烦的具体原因，并使用连词使句子连贯。

例: I feel impatient when I have to wash many dishes because I want to watch TV shows at the same time.

提案: 回答中表达不够自然，语法错误较多。建议使用更准确的词汇和句型，避免重复，并用连接词使句子更流畅。

例: I feel bored when I have to do something for a long time. For example, I don't have patience to do handicrafts and prefer to go outside and exercise.

提案: 回答不完整且语法错误较多。建议直接回答问题，说明实习经历中是否需要耐心，并用完整句子表达感受。

例: I am currently a student, so I don't have a full-time job. However, during my internship last summer, I had to be patient because I spent long hours sitting in the office.

提案: 回答表达不清晰，语法和词汇使用不当。建议简洁明了地比较现在和过去的耐心程度，并用具体例子支持。

例: Yes, I am more patient now than when I was a child. Before, I wanted to play outside instead of studying, but now I can stay in my room to prepare for tests.

× I think I'm not the Super patient.

✓ I think I'm not very patient.

这里“Super patient”用法不正确，应该用副词或形容词来描述耐心程度，改为“very patient”更自然。

× I don't really have the much patience to washes the dishes.

✓ I don't really have much patience to wash the dishes.

“the much patience”中“the”不应该出现，且“washes”应为动词原形“wash”，因为前面有“to”不定式。

× I really want to watching the TV shows when I watching the dishes.

✓ I really want to watch TV shows when I am washing the dishes.

“want to”后面应接动词原形，“watching”应改为“watch”；“when I watching”缺少助动词，应改为“when I am washing”。

× So there are some when there are so many dish in there.

✓ So there are some times when there are so many dishes there.

“dish”应为复数“dishes”，且句子缺少“times”使句意完整。

× When I do some things for the long time, I will feel so boring such as I don't have the patience to do some handmade.

✓ When I do some things for a long time, I will feel very bored; for example, I don't have the patience to do some handicrafts.

“so boring”应改为“very bored”表示感受；“the long time”应为“a long time”；“handmade”用词不当，应改为“handicrafts”。

× I really want to go outside and do more exercise when I am doing something for the long time.

✓ I really want to go outside and do more exercise when I have been doing something for a long time.

“for the long time”应为“for a long time”；“when I am doing”改为完成进行时“when I have been doing”更符合语境。

× And you note now I'm a student so I don't know we need to do some work.

✓ You know, now I'm a student, so I don't know if we need to do some work.

句子结构混乱，缺少连词“if”，且“you note”应为“you know”。

× But the next summer holiday I went to the company to do some internship.

✓ But next summer holiday, I will go to the company to do some internship.

“next summer holiday”表示将来，应使用将来时“will go”，而非过去时“went”。

× I sit in the office for a long time, I feel so boring and I really want.

✓ I sit in the office for a long time, I feel so bored and I really want to leave.

“so boring”应改为“so bored”表示感受；句子不完整，补充“to leave”使句意完整。

× Yes, I think, I think that I spot on it.

✓ Yes, I think I got it right.

“spot on it”用法不当，应该用“got it right”表达“说得对”。

× I think when I was a child, I read when I was studied.

✓ I think when I was a child, I played instead of studying.

“read when I was studied”语法错误，且时态不对，改为“played instead of studying”更符合语境。

× But now when I practice my text prepared my test, I I can stay in my room.

✓ But now when I practice and prepare for my test, I can stay in my room.

“practice my text prepared my test”结构混乱，缺少连词“and”，且“text”应为“test”。