Patience— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi phát âm và từ vựng không chính xác (ví dụ: 'baton' thay vì 'patient', 'lose my call' thay vì 'lose my cool', 'beating person' thay vì 'patient person'). Bạn nên chú ý phát âm chính xác và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp để câu trả lời tự nhiên và dễ hiểu hơn.

例: I would say I am a patient person. I'm generally quite patient when it comes to big picture things like long-term goals or waiting for the right opportunity. However, I sometimes lose my cool over small daily annoyances. Overall, I would describe myself as a patient person, but it's still a work in progress.

提案: Bạn đã trả lời đúng trọng tâm nhưng có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác (ví dụ: 'programs keep rushing' nên là 'programs keep crashing', 'feel a bit disrespectful for all the people time' nên là 'feels a bit disrespectful to everyone's time', 'make me feel important' nên là 'make me feel impatient'). Hãy chú ý sử dụng từ vựng chính xác và cấu trúc câu đúng để câu trả lời rõ ràng hơn.

例: My biggest pet peeve is probably inefficient technology. When my Internet is slow or programs keep crashing, it really tests my patience. Another thing is when people are significantly late for an appointment; it feels a bit disrespectful to everyone's time and that can definitely make me feel impatient.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự hoàn chỉnh và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, từ vựng (ví dụ: 'depend' nên là 'depends', 'creative project' nên là 'creative projects', 'enrolled' nên là 'engrossed', 'close all check up time' không rõ nghĩa, câu cuối bị bỏ dở). Bạn nên luyện tập cách xây dựng câu hoàn chỉnh, sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và tránh bỏ dở câu để câu trả lời rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn.

例: Honestly, it really depends on the activity. If it's something I'm interested in, like working on creative projects or reading a good book, I can get completely engrossed and lose track of time. However, if it's a tedious or repetitive task, I might feel bored and impatient.

提案: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác (ví dụ: 'long temporal check' không rõ nghĩa, 'be bitten with the process' nên là 'be patient with the process', 'money client expectations' nên là 'manage client expectations', 'ratio of patients' nên là 'a lot of patience'). Bạn nên luyện tập sử dụng từ vựng chính xác và cấu trúc câu đúng để câu trả lời tự nhiên và dễ hiểu hơn.

例: Yes, patience is a key requirement in my job. I often handle long-term projects where you don't see results overnight. You have to be patient with the process, deal with expected delays calmly, and manage client expectations. Without a lot of patience, it would be a very stressful job.

提案: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi phát âm và từ vựng không chính xác (ví dụ: 'Beijing' thay vì 'patience', 'come with aid' nên là 'come with age', 'in the fools' nên là 'in the long run', 'from more patent' nên là 'more patient'). Bạn nên chú ý phát âm và sử dụng từ vựng chính xác để câu trả lời rõ ràng và tự nhiên hơn.

例: Without a doubt, I think patience is a skill that really comes with age and experience. When I was little, I wanted everything instantly. But as you grow up, you learn that good things, whether in your career or personal life, often take time in the long run. So yes, I'm definitely more patient these days.

× I'm generally quite baton when it comes to big picture things like long term rules or waiting for the right opportunity.

✓ I'm generally quite patient when it comes to big picture things like long term goals or waiting for the right opportunity.

The word 'baton' is incorrect here; the correct adjective is 'patient' to describe someone who can wait calmly. Also, 'rules' should be 'goals' to fit the context of long-term plans.

× But I have to admit I can sometimes lose my call over small daily a nuisance.

✓ But I have to admit I can sometimes lose my cool over small daily nuisances.

The phrase 'lose my call' is incorrect; the correct idiom is 'lose my cool' meaning to become angry. Also, 'a nuisance' should be plural 'nuisances' to match 'small daily'.

× So I would describe myself at a beating person overall but I but it's still a work in progress.

✓ So I would describe myself as a patient person overall, but it's still a work in progress.

The phrase 'at a beating person' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'as a patient person'. Also, the sentence had an extra 'but I' which was removed for clarity.

× When my Internet is lacking or programs keep rushing it really tests my patience.

✓ When my Internet is slow or programs keep crashing, it really tests my patience.

The verb 'rushing' is incorrect in this context; 'crashing' is the correct verb for programs failing. Also, 'Internet is lacking' is better expressed as 'Internet is slow'.

× Another thing is when people are significantly late for an appointment it feel a bit disrespectful for all the people time and that can definitely make me feel important.

✓ Another thing is when people are significantly late for an appointment; it feels a bit disrespectful to everyone's time and that can definitely make me feel impatient.

The verb 'feel' should be 'feels' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. Also, 'for all the people time' is incorrect; it should be 'to everyone's time'. The word 'important' is incorrect here; 'impatient' fits the context.

× Honestly it really depend on the activity.

✓ Honestly, it really depends on the activity.

The verb 'depend' should be 'depends' to agree with the singular subject 'it' in present tense.

× It is something I'm generally interested in, like working on creative project or reading a good book.

✓ It is something I'm generally interested in, like working on creative projects or reading a good book.

The noun 'project' should be plural 'projects' to match the general statement.

× I can get completely enrolled and close all check up time.

✓ I can get completely engrossed and lose track of time.

The word 'enrolled' is incorrect; the correct word is 'engrossed' meaning fully absorbed. 'Close all check up time' is unclear; 'lose track of time' is the correct expression.

× However if it tedious or repeated task I might admit it.

✓ However, if it is a tedious or repetitive task, I might admit it.

The sentence is missing the verb 'is' and the adjective 'repeated' should be 'repetitive' to describe tasks. Also, commas are added for clarity.

× I can feel like a.

✓ I can feel like giving up.

The sentence is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'giving up' completes the thought and makes the sentence meaningful.

× In my work. I often handle long temporal check where you don't see result overnight.

✓ In my work, I often handle long-term tasks where you don't see results overnight.

The phrase 'long temporal check' is incorrect; 'long-term tasks' is appropriate. Also, 'result' should be plural 'results'.

× You have to be bitten with the process, deal with an expected delay calmly and money client expectations.

✓ You have to be patient with the process, deal with expected delays calmly, and manage client expectations.

The phrase 'be bitten with' is incorrect; it should be 'be patient with'. 'An expected delay' should be plural 'expected delays'. 'Money client expectations' is incorrect; it should be 'manage client expectations'.

× Without a ratio of patients it would be very stressful job.

✓ Without a ratio of patience, it would be a very stressful job.

The phrase 'ratio of patients' is incorrect; it should be 'ratio of patience'. Also, 'stressful job' needs an article 'a' before it.

× Without doubt, I think Beijing is a skill that really come with aid and experience.

✓ Without a doubt, I think patience is a skill that really comes with age and experience.

'Beijing' is a mishearing or typo for 'patience'. 'Come' should be 'comes' to agree with singular subject 'skill'. 'Aid' should be 'age'.

× When I was a little I wanted everything instantly.

✓ When I was little, I wanted everything instantly.

The phrase 'a little' is incorrect here; 'little' without article is correct to mean 'when I was young'. Comma added for clarity.

× But as you grow up you learn that good things, whatever in your career or personal life, often take time in the fools.

✓ But as you grow up, you learn that good things, whether in your career or personal life, often take time in the full.

'Whatever' should be 'whether' to introduce alternatives. 'In the fools' is incorrect; likely intended 'in the full' or 'in full' meaning completely. Comma added for clarity.

× So yet I'm definitely from more patent this day.

✓ So yet I'm definitely far more patient these days.

'From more patent' is incorrect; it should be 'far more patient'. 'This day' should be 'these days' to indicate current time.