Patience— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时语法和表达不够自然，且有些冗余。建议简化句子结构，避免重复表达，并注意冠词和词性使用。

例: Yes, I consider myself a patient person in most situations. However, when I face difficulties and others interfere, I sometimes become impatient and angry.

提案: 回答内容较为笼统，表达不够流畅，句子结尾不完整。建议使用连词连接句子，并具体说明感受。

例: I feel impatient when I spend a long time trying to solve difficult math problems but can't find a solution. This makes me feel frustrated and annoyed.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和表达不自然的问题。建议使用更准确的词汇和句式，避免口语化的填充词。

例: I usually feel bored and tired when I have to focus on a task for a long time, especially if it is difficult. It can be quite exhausting.

提案: 回答内容较好，但表达略显口语化，建议使用更正式的表达方式，并注意句子连贯性。

例: Yes, my job involves research in deep learning, which is a rapidly developing field. I need to be patient as I generate and test many ideas to find the best solutions.

提案: 回答中有多处语法错误和表达不清晰，且有重复词汇。建议简化句子，明确表达原因。

例: Yes, I am more patient now than when I was a child. As a child, I rarely faced difficulties and often got angry, but now I have become more patient because of the challenges I have experienced.

× Yes, I think in most situations I am patient man and I treat everything without anger.

✓ Yes, I think in most situations I am a patient man and I treat everything without anger.

这里缺少冠词“a”，因为“man”是可数名词，单数形式前需要加不定冠词“a”。

× But you know, if I made some difficulties and someone implied, I might be impatient and get anger.

✓ But you know, if I face some difficulties and someone implies, I might be impatient and get angry.

“made some difficulties”用法不当，应使用“face some difficulties”；“someone implied”时态和用法错误，应为“someone implies”；“get anger”应改为“get angry”，因为“angry”是形容词，表示生气的状态。

× I think something can make me feel impatient.

✓ I think something can make me feel impatient.

此句语法正确，无需修改。

× For example, if I am thinking about a solution to some difficult math problems and I can't figure it out using a lot of time, I may be impatient and annoyed and.

✓ For example, if I am thinking about a solution to some difficult math problems and I can't figure it out after using a lot of time, I may be impatient and annoyed.

“using a lot of time”表达不自然，应改为“after using a lot of time”；句尾多余的“and”应删除。

× I may feel bored and tired after doing a thing for a long time, you know, Focusing on something for a long time isn't an easy thing and especially is too difficult.

✓ I may feel bored and tired after doing something for a long time, you know. Focusing on something for a long time isn't easy and is especially difficult.

“doing a thing”不自然，应改为“doing something”；句子过长且缺少标点，应分开；“isn't an easy thing”改为“isn't easy”更简洁；“especially is too difficult”语序错误，应为“is especially difficult”。

× I think it has really put a burden on me.

✓ I think it has really put a burden on me.

此句语法正确，无需修改。

× Yes, I am doing some research with deep learning.

✓ Yes, I am doing some research on deep learning.

介词“with”用法不当，研究某领域应使用“research on”。

× You know, it is really a rapid developing field and I have to think a lot of ideas and try them to find the best solution.

✓ You know, it is really a rapidly developing field and I have to think of a lot of ideas and try them to find the best solution.

“rapid developing”应使用副词修饰动词，改为“rapidly developing”；“think a lot of ideas”表达错误，应为“think of a lot of ideas”。

× So I really need to be patient.

✓ So I really need to be patient.

此句语法正确，无需修改。

× Yes, I think so.

✓ Yes, I think so.

此句语法正确，无需修改。

× You know, when I was a child, I didn't meet any difficulty.

✓ You know, when I was a child, I didn't encounter any difficulties.

“meet any difficulty”用法不当，应改为“encounter any difficulties”；“difficulty”应使用复数形式“difficulties”。

× And I, you know, just like a boy may sometimes be anger and you know, but now I'm more in, I'm more patient because of eating difficulties.

✓ And I, you know, just like a boy may sometimes be angry, but now I'm more patient because of facing difficulties.

“be anger”错误，应为“be angry”；“more in”无意义，应删除；“because of eating difficulties”表达错误，应为“because of facing difficulties”。