Patience— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but there are some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing that affect naturalness. Try to use singular/plural forms correctly and avoid redundancy. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

例: Yes, I consider myself a patient person. For instance, when I face difficult problems in my homework, I spend a lot of time solving them, and I can focus on one task at a time.

提案: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to organize your ideas more clearly and use linking words to connect your points. Also, avoid incomplete sentences and be specific about your reasons.

例: I feel impatient when the weather is bad, such as on hot summer days or rainy days. Additionally, difficult tasks can also make me feel impatient.

提案: Your answer is clear and shows good content with contrasting ideas. To improve, try to use more varied vocabulary and linking phrases to enhance coherence.

例: When I have to do something for a long time, I often feel impatient and eager to finish quickly; however, I also see it as a valuable chance to build my patience.

提案: Your answer is relevant but contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Use singular/plural forms correctly and add linking words to improve flow.

例: Actually, I am still a student, so my schoolwork requires a lot of patience. For example, I often spend a long time solving difficult problems.

提案: Your answer is clear and relevant with a good example. To improve, try to add a linking phrase and a bit more detail to enrich your response.

例: Of course, I am more patient now than when I was a child because I can focus on difficult tasks for a longer time without getting frustrated.

× I think I am a patient person. For example, if I encounter a difficult problems in my homework, I will spend some money time on solving it and what's more, I can focus on one tasks.

✓ I think I am a patient person. For example, if I encounter a difficult problem in my homework, I will spend some time on solving it and what's more, I can focus on one task.

The word 'problems' should be singular 'problem' because it is preceded by the adjective 'a difficult', which requires a singular noun. Similarly, 'money time' is incorrect; it should be 'some time' to indicate an unspecified amount of time. Also, 'one tasks' should be 'one task' because 'one' requires a singular noun.

× Actually, I am still a student now, so my schoolwork really requires me to be patient. For example, I have to spend a long time doing one difficult problems.

✓ Actually, I am still a student now, so my schoolwork really requires me to be patient. For example, I have to spend a long time doing one difficult problem.

The phrase 'one difficult problems' is incorrect because 'one' requires a singular noun. Therefore, 'problems' should be changed to 'problem'.