Patience— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答は質問に直接答えていますが、文法の誤りや不自然な表現が見られます。例えば、「practiced a baseball」ではなく「practiced baseball」が正しいです。また、文を簡潔にし、より自然な表現を使うことが望ましいです。

例: Yes, I consider myself a patient person because when I was a child, I practiced baseball regularly despite having very strict managers and coaches who often got angry, but I managed to stay calm.

提案: 内容が不明瞭で文法的な誤りが多いです。例えば「being get a lady for the exam」は意味が通じません。具体的な状況を明確にし、文法を正しく使うことが必要です。

例: I feel impatient when I have to wait for a long time before an important exam. In such situations, I often feel anxious and tend to eat and drink more than usual.

提案: 回答は比較的明確ですが、より自然な表現と論理的なつながりを強化すると良いでしょう。例えば、「I understand that it is not so good for my body health」は「I know it's not good for my health」の方が自然です。

例: I get very nervous when I have to do tasks that take a long time. Therefore, I usually drink three or four cups of coffee to stay alert, although I know it's not good for my health.

提案: 文法の誤りや不自然な表現が目立ちます。例えば「wait someone」ではなく「wait for someone」が正しいです。また、最後の文は意味が不明瞭なので、明確に表現しましょう。

例: Yes, as a journalist, I often have to wait for people for two or three hours, and sometimes even more than five hours. Although this can disrupt my interview schedule, I manage to be patient and complete my work.

提案: 文法の誤りがあり、表現が不自然です。例えば「I can't wait someone」ではなく「I couldn't wait for someone」が正しいです。過去と現在の比較を明確にし、自然な表現を心がけましょう。

例: Yes, I have become more patient compared to when I was a child. For example, when I was in junior high school, I couldn't wait for someone for even 20 minutes, but now I can wait calmly.

× I always practiced a baseball and a very strict managers and coaches were very angry, but I could manage.

✓ I always practiced baseball and very strict managers and coaches were very angry, but I could manage.

The phrase 'practiced a baseball' is incorrect because 'baseball' is an uncountable noun in this context and does not require an article 'a'. Also, 'practiced baseball' is the correct verb + noun structure here.

× a very strict managers and coaches were very angry

✓ very strict managers and coaches were very angry

The article 'a' is incorrectly used before the plural noun 'managers'. Articles like 'a' are used only with singular countable nouns.

× I don't like the situation such as being get a lady for the exam.

✓ I don't like situations such as getting late for the exam.

The phrase 'being get a lady' is incorrect. The correct form is 'getting late'. Also, 'situation' should be plural 'situations' to match the general statement.

× I usually have to wait someone for two or three hours

✓ I usually have to wait for someone for two or three hours

The verb 'wait' requires the preposition 'for' before the object. Omitting 'for' is incorrect.

× I can't wait someone for 20 minutes

✓ I couldn't wait for someone for 20 minutes

Again, 'wait' requires 'for' before the object. Also, since the sentence refers to the past, 'can't' should be changed to 'couldn't'.