Patience— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Are you a patient person?
受験者
It depends. I'm a patient with something about which I'm passionate, such as playing computer computer games, watching live streams, but when it comes to boring things, I don't think I maintain my patience level.
試験官
What is it that makes you feel impatient?
受験者
Well, for me, I think something about the repetition will make me feel impatient. For example, if I memorize the English vocabulary, I will feel impatient because I need to repeat the word again, over and again. So it takes a lot of time and effort.
試験官
How do you feel when you have to do something for a long time?
受験者
Well, initially I might feel a bit impatient because doing something for a long time can be quite exhausting. However, I will try to calm myself down and stay focused because the patient is very important for me.
試験官
Does your job require you to be patient?
受験者
Yeah, as a college student, I have to say we must be patient about our study. For example, if I work on some assignments or do some researches, the patient is the key which may which make makes sure about our study will be success.
試験官
Are you more patient now than when you were a child?
受験者
Well of of course I'm more patient than I was young. When I was a child I was easily distracted by computer games or toys so I couldn't be focused on something important. But now I I have developed the experience of self-discipline which help me stay calm.
評価
総合
Part 1
Are you a patient person?
スコア: 70.0提案: 回答时应避免重复词汇，如“computer computer games”，并且句子结构应更自然流畅。可以简化表达，避免冗长，使回答更有效。
例: It depends. I'm patient when I'm passionate about something, like playing computer games or watching live streams, but I lose patience with boring tasks.
What is it that makes you feel impatient?
スコア: 75.0提案: 回答中应使用更自然的表达方式，避免重复“again, over and again”，并且可以使用连接词使句子更连贯。
例: Well, repetition makes me feel impatient. For instance, when I memorize English vocabulary, repeating the same words multiple times can be tiring and time-consuming.
How do you feel when you have to do something for a long time?
スコア: 70.0提案: 注意单词拼写错误，如“patient”应为“patience”，并且句子应更简洁自然。使用连接词使表达更流畅。
例: At first, I might feel a bit impatient because long tasks can be exhausting. However, I try to stay calm and focused since patience is very important to me.
Does your job require you to be patient?
スコア: 65.0提案: 回答中存在语法错误和词汇使用不当，如“patient”应为“patience”，并且句子结构混乱。应简化句子并正确使用词汇。
例: Yes, as a college student, I need to be patient with my studies. For example, when I work on assignments or research, patience is key to achieving success.
Are you more patient now than when you were a child?
スコア: 70.0提案: 避免重复词汇，如“of of”和“I I”，并且句子应更简洁自然。可以使用连接词增强句子连贯性。
例: Of course, I'm more patient now than when I was young. As a child, I was easily distracted by games and toys, but now I've developed self-discipline that helps me stay calm.
文法
× playing computer computer games
✓ playing computer games
这里“computer”重复出现，属于多余重复，应删除一个“computer”以符合英语表达习惯。
× do some researches
✓ do some research
“research”是不可数名词，不能用复数形式“researches”，应使用单数形式。
× the patient is very important for me
✓ patience is very important for me
此处应使用名词“patience”（耐心），而非形容词“patient”（病人），词性错误导致句意不明。
× which may which make makes sure about our study will be success
✓ which may make sure that our study will be successful
动词“make”不应重复，且“success”应为形容词“successful”修饰“study”，主谓一致和词性错误。
× I was young
✓ I was a child
“young”是形容词，不能单独作名词使用，表达年龄时应用名词“child”。
× I have developed the experience of self-discipline which help me stay calm
✓ I have developed the experience of self-discipline which helps me stay calm
关系代词“which”指代单数“experience”，谓语动词应用第三人称单数形式“helps”，主谓一致错误。
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