Patience— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Avoid asking the examiner questions in your answer. Focus on directly answering the question with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Also, try to be more specific about why you consider yourself patient.

例: Yes, I consider myself a patient person because I remain calm even in stressful situations, such as waiting in long queues or dealing with difficult people.

提案: Do not ask the examiner questions in your response. Use linking words to connect your ideas and provide more specific examples to explain what makes you impatient.

例: Several things test my patience; for instance, waiting for a long time without any updates can be frustrating, and also, when situations are chaotic and unorganized, I tend to feel impatient.

提案: Your answer is quite good but avoid informal phrases like 'kinda' and unclear expressions like 'turn off the task'. Use linking words to improve coherence and be more precise in your explanation.

例: My feelings depend on the task; if I enjoy it, I become fully engaged and enter a flow state. However, if the task is repetitive or tedious, I start to feel restless and lose focus.

提案: Avoid unclear or incorrect phrases like 'It's all part of the phone.' Provide more specific details about how patience is required in your job and use linking words to connect your ideas.

例: Yes, my job requires a lot of patience because I often have to answer complex questions and listen carefully to customers, which helps me provide better support.

提案: Avoid asking questions back to the examiner. Give a direct answer with specific supporting details and use linking words to make your response coherent.

例: I believe I am more patient now than when I was a child because with experience and maturity, I have learned to control my emotions better and handle difficult situations calmly.

× I guess it all comes down to then turn off the task.

✓ I guess it all comes down to turning off the task.

The original sentence has a sentence structure error where 'then turn off the task' is incorrect. The phrase should be 'turning off the task' to correctly function as the object of the preposition 'to'. Using the gerund form 'turning' is appropriate here to indicate the action related to 'comes down to'.

× It's all part of the phone.

✓ It's all part of the job.

The phrase 'part of the phone' is incorrect in this context. The intended meaning is likely 'part of the job', which is a common expression meaning something is a normal aspect of one's work. Using 'phone' here is a misuse of the definite article and noun choice, leading to confusion.