Patience— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và tự nhiên. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp, đồng thời sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và rõ ràng hơn.

例: No, I am not a very patient person because I often get frustrated when things don't go as planned.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn chưa hoàn chỉnh và thiếu liên kết logic. Bạn nên trả lời đầy đủ, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và thêm chi tiết cụ thể để làm rõ ý.

例: I feel impatient when things don't go as I originally intended, especially if there are unexpected delays or problems.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn không rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và cung cấp ví dụ cụ thể, có liên kết logic.

例: I usually feel okay when I have to do something for a long time, as long as I can stay focused and the task is meaningful.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn rất khó hiểu và không liên quan trực tiếp đến câu hỏi. Bạn nên trả lời rõ ràng, tập trung vào yêu cầu của câu hỏi và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh.

例: Yes, my job requires me to be patient, especially when dealing with difficult situations or helping others solve problems.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý nhưng thiếu rõ ràng và ngữ pháp chưa chính xác. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, giải thích rõ hơn và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh.

例: Yes, I am more patient now than when I was a child because I have learned to understand others and control my emotions better.

× No, I am I only annoying everything I do.

✓ No, I am only annoying in everything I do.

The original sentence has a redundant 'I am I' and lacks proper sentence structure. The correction removes the extra 'I' and adds 'in' to correctly express the idea of being annoying in all actions.

× I may feel if things don't go as originally intended. And.

✓ I may feel impatient if things don't go as originally intended.

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks the object of 'feel'. Adding 'impatient' clarifies the feeling, and completing the sentence removes the fragment 'And'.

× I feel normal because things don't go as I really intended. For example, you don't you don't go too late. Why? It's OK.

✓ I feel normal because things don't always go as I really intend. For example, if you don't go too late, it's OK.

The original sentence has repetition and unclear phrasing. The correction removes repeated words, adjusts tense for consistency, and clarifies the example for better understanding.

× I think a new job, crying parents I feel is completely normal as long as it's not too relationship or force. For example is being late for school or late for work.

✓ I think in a new job, feeling frustrated is completely normal as long as it's not too much pressure or force. For example, being late for school or work.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. The correction restructures the sentence for clarity, replaces unclear phrases with appropriate ones, and corrects the example's structure.

× Yes, I often give choice to children or similar as others taught me since I was little.

✓ Yes, I often give choices to children, similar to how others taught me since I was little.

The original sentence has awkward phrasing and missing prepositions. The correction adds necessary prepositions and clarifies the comparison for better readability.