Patience— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达了观点，但语法和用词不够准确，且句子结构较为简单。建议注意时态和语法的正确使用，避免重复表达，并尝试使用更丰富的词汇。

例: No, I am not a patient person. When I face urgent problems, I try to find quick solutions. However, if the solution is hard to find, I often feel anxious and frustrated.

提案: 回答不完整，句子结构混乱，缺少连贯性。建议完整表达观点，使用连接词使句子更流畅，并避免语法错误。

例: I feel impatient because I always want to find quick solutions. However, sometimes I can't make any progress, which makes me feel very anxious.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和用词不当，表达不够自然。建议注意时态一致性，使用更准确的词汇，并使句子更简洁。

例: I often feel impatient when I have to do something for a long time. If I don't make progress, I get upset and feel irritable.

提案: 回答中语法和表达不够准确，句子结构混乱。建议使用正确的语法结构，表达更清晰，并避免重复。

例: Yes, my job requires patience. For example, when I practice speaking English, it requires patience, but I find it hard to practice every day.

提案: 回答表达不清，语法错误较多，且有不完整的句子。建议简化表达，注意语法和时态，避免使用无意义的词汇。

例: Yes, I am more patient now than when I was a child. My family said I was very irritable at age 10 and often got angry easily.

× If I made something urgent I will quick find a solution to it.

✓ If I make something urgent, I will quickly find a solution to it.

这里的条件句使用了过去式'made'，但后半句用的是将来时'will'，时态不一致。应使用一般现在时'make'来表达真实条件句。同时，'quick'应为副词形式'quickly'，修饰动词'find'。

× If I made something urgent I will quick find a solution to it.

✓ If I make something urgent, I will quickly find a solution to it.

'quick'是形容词，不能修饰动词'find'，应使用副词'quickly'。

× Because I always want to find the quick solutions and the things more quickly, but sometimes I can't even make a dent in the problems so I feel very anxious and.

✓ Because I always want to find quick solutions and do things more quickly, sometimes I can't even make a dent in the problems, so I feel very anxious.

句子中'Because'和'but'同时使用导致连接词重复，应去掉'but'。句尾的'and'后无内容，应删除。

× Because I always want to find the quick solutions and the things more quickly, but sometimes I can't even make a dent in the problems so I feel very anxious and.

✓ Because I always want to find quick solutions and do things more quickly, sometimes I can't even make a dent in the problems, so I feel very anxious.

'the quick solutions'中的定冠词'the'不必要，且'solutions'前不应有定冠词。'the things'应改为复数形式'things'且去掉定冠词。

× If I can't make any progress in one thing, I will upset and the bad feelings will come to my mind.

✓ If I can't make any progress in one thing, I will be upset and bad feelings will come to my mind.

'upset'作为形容词时需要系动词'be'，且'bad feelings'前不需要定冠词'the'。

× And I was irritable about these things.

✓ And I am irritable about these things.

根据上下文，描述现在的状态应使用现在时'am'，而非过去时'was'。

× For example when I learn English like exercise my oral language, it's a patient things, but I can't exercise every day.

✓ For example, when I learn English, like practicing my oral language, it's a patient thing, but I can't exercise every day.

'things'应为单数形式'thing'，因为前面用的是不定冠词'a'。

× For example when I learn English like exercise my oral language, it's a patient things, but I can't exercise every day.

✓ For example, when I learn English, like practicing my oral language, it's a patient thing, but I can't exercise every day.

'like exercise my oral language'表达不正确，应改为'like practicing my oral language'，使用动名词形式。

× Yes, although I am impatient now, but my family members say that when I was about 10 years old I was irritable about anything and even I achieved low school.

✓ Yes, although I am impatient now, my family members say that when I was about 10 years old, I was irritable about anything and even achieved low grades at school.

'although'和'but'不能同时使用，应去掉'but'。'achieved low school'表达不当，应改为'achieved low grades at school'。

× Yes, although I am impatient now, but my family members say that when I was about 10 years old I was irritable about anything and even I achieved low school.

✓ Yes, although I am impatient now, my family members say that when I was about 10 years old, I was irritable about anything and even achieved low grades at school.

句中'and even I achieved'中多余的主语'I'应去掉，保持句子结构简洁。