Patience— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时语法和表达不够准确，句子结构混乱，且内容不够具体。建议简化句子，直接回答问题，并用具体例子支持观点。

例: I am not a very patient person because I get tired easily when I have to wait for a long time. For example, I feel impatient when I have to stand in long queues.

提案: 表达不流畅，语法错误较多，内容重复且不连贯。建议使用连词连接句子，明确表达原因，并避免重复。

例: I feel impatient when I have to do things I dislike or wait for a delayed flight. Also, being around noisy children for a long time makes me feel tired and frustrated.

提案: 回答中有语法错误，句子结构不清晰，且内容表达重复。建议使用正确的时态和连词，表达更连贯。

例: It depends on the situation. If I do something I enjoy, I feel happy. However, if I do something I dislike for a long time, I feel tired. Nevertheless, I believe everyone should be patient, especially when working hard.

提案: 句子结构混乱，表达不完整，语法错误较多。建议简洁明了地回答问题，并用具体例子说明。

例: Yes, my job requires patience because I often face difficult challenges. For example, when I started my own business, I had to be patient to solve problems and manage responsibilities.

提案: 回答中时态使用不当，句子不够流畅。建议使用正确时态，简洁表达观点，并用具体细节支持。

例: Yes, I am more patient now than when I was a child. I used to have a short attention span, but now, because of work and challenges, I have learned to focus and be patient.

× If I do a things I like I'll feel enjoyable

✓ If I do things I like, I'll feel enjoyable

这里的“a things”是单复数搭配错误，'a'用于单数名词，而'things'是复数，应该去掉'a'。

× if I do the things I dislike I'll feel tired and exhausted and but I think everyone should be in should be patient to a lot of things especially for working hard.

✓ if I do the things I dislike, I'll feel tired and exhausted, but I think everyone should be patient with a lot of things, especially when working hard.

句中“in should be patient to a lot of things”搭配错误，应该是“be patient with”，且“and but”重复连接词，应去掉“and”。

× I will feel impatient especially I waiting a delayed flight a long time and I stay with my with a lot of children.

✓ I will feel impatient especially when I am waiting for a delayed flight for a long time and I stay with a lot of children.

动词“waiting”前缺少连词“when”，且“waiting a delayed flight”应为“waiting for a delayed flight”，表示等待某事物需要介词“for”。

× In my opinion, every job should have the quality of patient to face the difficult challenge in the work especially when you are want to build a company for yourself and you should have a lot of ability and responsibility so you should.

✓ In my opinion, every job should have the quality of patience to face difficult challenges at work, especially when you want to build a company for yourself, and you should have a lot of ability and responsibility.

“quality of patient”应为“quality of patience”，因为“patient”是形容词，“patience”是名词；“challenge”应为复数“challenges”；“in the work”应为“at work”；“are want”错误，应为“want”。

× When I was a child, I can't focus on all things for a long time and now because the work and the difficult situation, I must working hard and to take more attention in the scenes or work.

✓ When I was a child, I couldn't focus on all things for a long time, and now because of work and difficult situations, I must work hard and pay more attention to the scenes or work.

“must working”错误，情态动词后应接动词原形“work”；“to take more attention”应为“pay more attention to”；“because the work”应为“because of work”。

× When I was a child, I can't focus on all things for a long time

✓ When I was a child, I couldn't focus on all things for a long time

句子描述过去的情况，动词时态应为过去时，“can't”应改为“couldn't”。

× It's depends the situation.

✓ It depends on the situation.

“It's depends”中“depends”是动词，主语是“It”，应为“It depends”；“depends”后应加介词“on”。