Patience— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“has no too much patience for to deal with difficult things”不符合英语习惯。建议简化句子结构，使用正确的时态和词汇，使表达更自然流畅。

例: To be honest, I am not a very patient person. I often find it hard to deal with difficult situations. However, I believe patience is an important quality, especially in the workplace.

提案: 回答中存在重复和语法错误，如“that make that make me impatient”，句子结构混乱。建议使用连词连接句子，避免重复，并且表达更具体。

例: I usually feel impatient when I have to spend time with people I don't get along with or do tasks I dislike. For example, I prefer going outside and spending time with my friends because it makes me happy.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，如“Depend the different situation”，“if I doing something”。建议注意动词形式和句子结构，使用连接词使表达更连贯。

例: It depends on the situation. If I am doing something I enjoy, I usually feel happy and motivated. However, if I have to do something I dislike, I feel bored and impatient. After a while, especially with hard work, I get tired.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和重复，如“patient patient”，句子不够连贯。建议使用正确的词汇形式和连接词，表达更清晰。

例: In my opinion, every job requires patience. It helps you face challenges and deal with difficult customers or cases. Being patient also helps maintain good relationships, so patience is necessary.

提案: 回答中时态和词汇使用不当，如“have know the quality of patient”，表达重复。建议使用正确时态，简洁表达对比。

例: Definitely yes. When I was a child, I didn't understand the importance of patience and couldn't focus for long. Now, I can control myself and my emotions better, so I am more patient.

× I usually has no too much patience for to deal with difficult things.

✓ I usually have not too much patience to deal with difficult things.

主语是第一人称单数'I'，谓语动词应使用'have'而不是'has'。此外，'no too much'表达不正确，应改为'not too much'。

× I usually has no too much patience for to deal with difficult things.

✓ I usually have not too much patience to deal with difficult things.

'patience for to deal with'中的'for to'用法错误，应直接用不定式'to deal with'。

× However, I believe patient is an important quality for people to overcome the difficult things, especially for working SO.

✓ However, I believe patience is an important quality for people to overcome difficult things, especially when working SO.

'patient'应为名词形式'patience'，'the difficult things'中'difficult things'前不需要定冠词'the'。

× especially for working SO.

✓ especially when working SO.

'for working'用法不当，表达时间状语应使用'when working'。

× I usually feel impatient if stay with the person I dislike and to do the things I dislike such as to do the job I don't like and to stay with my children too long time and that make that make me impatient.

✓ I usually feel impatient if I stay with people I dislike and do things I dislike, such as doing a job I don't like or staying with my children for too long, and that makes me impatient.

句子缺少主语'I'，不定式用法错误，应使用动名词形式，且句子结构混乱，需调整使其通顺。

× and that make that make me impatient.

✓ and that makes me impatient.

主语'that'为第三人称单数，谓语动词应使用单数形式'makes'。

× For example I like to go outside and spend time with my friends and just make me enjoyable.

✓ For example, I like to go outside and spend time with my friends, which just makes me feel happy.

'make me enjoyable'表达错误，应为'makes me feel happy'或类似表达。

× Depend the different situation I will feel different, such as if I doing something I really enjoy I usually feel very happy and a good emotion, but if I to do something I don't like I will feel boring and impatient.

✓ Depending on the situation, I will feel differently. For example, if I am doing something I really enjoy, I usually feel very happy and have good emotions, but if I do something I don't like, I will feel bored and impatient.

'Depend the different situation'应为'Depending on the situation'，动词形式错误，'feel boring'应为'feel bored'，句子结构需调整。

× After a while I will feel tired, especially for some hard work.

✓ After a while, I will feel tired, especially after some hard work.

'especially for'用法不当，应为'especially after'。

× In my opinion, every job should have the quality of patient, It can help you to face the the challenge and deal with difficult customer and case.

✓ In my opinion, every job should have the quality of patience. It can help you face challenges and deal with difficult customers and cases.

'quality of patient'应为'quality of patience'，'the the challenge'重复，'customer'和'case'应使用复数形式。

× and deal with difficult customer and case.

✓ and deal with difficult customers and cases.

'customer'和'case'应为复数形式以匹配上下文。

× Therefore patient patient is necessary to.

✓ Therefore, patience is necessary too.

重复使用'patient'错误，应为'patience'，且'to'用法错误，应为'too'。

× When I was a child, I have know the quality of patient and I haven't the ability to focus on something for a long time.

✓ When I was a child, I did not know the quality of patience and I didn't have the ability to focus on something for a long time.

过去时态错误，'have know'应为'did not know'，'haven't'应为'didn't have'。

× When I was a child, I have know the quality of patient

✓ When I was a child, I did not know the quality of patience

'quality of patient'应为'quality of patience'，'patient'是形容词，'patience'是名词。

× And now I can control myself and I can control my emotion to have more, more, more patient to do something.

✓ And now I can control myself and my emotions to be more patient when doing something.

'emotion'应为复数形式'emotions'，'more patient'是形容词，不能直接用作名词，且表达需调整。