Patience— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cevabınız doğal ancak dilbilgisi hataları ve tekrarlar var. "make" yerine "makes" kullanmalısınız ve cümlenizi daha akıcı yapmak için bağlaçlar ekleyebilirsiniz.

例: No, I'm not a patient person because waiting for something to happen makes me feel exhausted.

提案: Cümleniz anlamlı ancak "about to happen" ifadesi biraz garip kullanılmış. Daha doğal ve akıcı bir ifade tercih edin.

例: Waiting for good things to happen makes me feel impatient.

提案: Cümleniz uzun ve karmaşık, dilbilgisi hataları var. Daha kısa ve net cümleler kurun, ayrıca bağlaçlarla cümleleri bağlayın.

例: If I have to do something for a long time, I get tired and bored because I want new experiences in my life.

提案: Cümlenizde "listen their opinions" ifadesi yanlış. "Listen to their opinions" olmalı. Ayrıca cümleleri bağlamak için uygun bağlaçlar kullanın.

例: Well, I am a student, so I have to be patient in class because I need to listen to lessons and to other people's opinions.

提案: Cümleniz anlamlı ancak "than how it was" ifadesi yerine daha doğal bir yapı kullanabilirsiniz. Ayrıca bağlaçlarla cümleyi daha akıcı yapabilirsiniz.

例: I'm more patient now than when I was a child because, in my opinion, time seems to pass faster nowadays.

× No, I'm really not a patient person because waiting for something to happen make me exhausted.

✓ No, I'm really not a patient person because waiting for something to happen makes me exhausted.

The verb 'make' should be 'makes' to agree with the singular subject 'waiting'. This is a subject-verb agreement issue involving singular and plural forms.

× Waiting for the good things about to happen makes me impatient.

✓ Waiting for good things to happen makes me impatient.

The phrase 'about to happen' is incorrect here. The correct form is 'to happen' after 'waiting for'. Also, 'the good things' should be 'good things' as a general statement.

× If I have to do something continually for a long time, then I'd get sick of this and I'll be tired because I would want to happen new things in my life.

✓ If I have to do something continuously for a long time, then I'd get sick of it and I'll be tired because I would want new things to happen in my life.

The adverb 'continually' should be 'continuously' to express an unbroken action. 'Sick of this' should be 'sick of it' to refer correctly to the action. The phrase 'want to happen new things' is incorrect; it should be 'want new things to happen'.

× Well, I am a student, so I have to be patient in the class, I have to listen to lessons and I have to listen their opinions.

✓ Well, I am a student, so I have to be patient in class, I have to listen to lessons and I have to listen to their opinions.

The phrase 'in the class' should be 'in class' as a general activity. Also, 'listen their opinions' is incorrect; the correct form is 'listen to their opinions' because 'listen' requires the preposition 'to'.