Patience— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时应避免时态错误，如"felt"应为"feel"，并且尽量使句子更简洁自然。可以用连接词使句子更连贯。

例: Yes, I am a patient person because I can wait a long time to learn new things or explain complex concepts to my classmates. However, I sometimes feel impatient when waiting for the bus.

提案: 注意时态一致性，"was"应改为"am"。句子结构可以更自然，避免语法错误。

例: I usually feel impatient when public transport is late, especially when I am in a hurry.

提案: 回答应更连贯，避免重复表达。可以用连接词连接句子，使表达更自然。

例: Sometimes I am patient and willing to spend a long time on a task, but it depends on my interest. For example, if I am learning something I like, I don't mind spending a lot of time on it.

提案: 回答较好，但可以用连接词使句子更流畅，避免重复使用"understand"。

例: Yes, my job involves mathematics and computer science, which include many complex concepts. Therefore, I need to be patient and spend a lot of time thoroughly learning them.

提案: 回答可以更自然，避免"I remembered that"的冗余表达。

例: Definitely yes. When I was a child, I didn't like waiting and often shouted if things were late.

× But sometimes I felt not very patient to wait for the bus.

✓ But sometimes I feel not very patient waiting for the bus.

这里描述的是现在的感受，应该用一般现在时。'felt'是过去式，和上下文时态不符。建议用一般现在时的'feel'，并且'patient to wait'表达不自然，改为'patient waiting'更符合英语习惯。

× I usually feel impatient when the public transport will be late, especially when I was very rush for something.

✓ I usually feel impatient when the public transport is late, especially when I am in a rush for something.

'will be late'在这里不合适，描述习惯性事实应使用一般现在时'is late'。'was very rush'中'rush'是名词，前面需要形容词或短语，且时态应与上下文一致，改为'am in a rush'。

× Sometimes I feel so patient and want to wait for a long time, but sometimes not.

✓ Sometimes I feel very patient and want to wait for a long time, but sometimes I do not.

'sometimes not'表达不完整，缺少主语和谓语，应该补充完整为'sometimes I do not'。此外，'so patient'改为'very patient'更自然。

× I think it depends on my interest for it.

✓ I think it depends on my interest in it.

'interest'后面搭配介词应为'in'，表示对某事物的兴趣，'interest for'是不正确的搭配。

× There are many complex concepts for me to understand, so I need to spend a lot of time to understand them thoroughly.

✓ There are many complex concepts for me to understand, so I need to spend a lot of time understanding them thoroughly.

'spend time to do something'结构不正确，正确用法是'spend time doing something'，即动词用-ing形式。

× Definitely yes. When I was a child I remembered that I didn't want to wait for everything and always shouted if something was late.

✓ Definitely yes. When I was a child I remember that I didn't want to wait for everything and always shouted if something was late.

'remembered'是过去式，和句中时间状语'When I was a child'搭配时，表达过去的记忆，通常用一般现在时'remember'更自然，表示现在仍记得过去的事情。