Patience— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时语言不够流畅，有重复和语法错误。建议简化句子结构，避免重复表达，并且注意语法准确性。

例: I am usually patient, especially with children, because I enjoy spending time with them. However, I become impatient when I have to wait for a long time, as I dislike wasting time.

提案: 回答中有重复词汇和语法错误，表达不够简洁。建议使用连贯的句子，避免重复，并且用连接词使表达更流畅。

例: I feel impatient when I have to wait in long queues or get stuck in traffic jams because I think these situations waste my valuable time.

提案: 回答结构较好，但表达稍显简单。建议丰富词汇，使用更多连接词，使表达更自然流畅。

例: If I am interested in a task that takes a long time, I usually feel happy and patient. However, if the task is frustrating, I tend to become anxious and impatient.

提案: 回答中出现了矛盾和不恰当的表达，且结尾不正式。建议明确表达观点，避免矛盾，并使用正式语言。

例: As a student, I need to be patient with my schoolwork because staying calm helps me avoid mistakes and complete my homework effectively.

提案: 回答内容完整，但语法和时态使用不够准确。建议注意时态一致性，并使用更丰富的词汇。

例: Yes, I am definitely more patient now than when I was a child. I used to get anxious and impatient, especially during competitions, but now I can control my emotions better and remain calm in various situations.

× Well, it depends as I always, I'm always patient with the children and I can stay well with them.

✓ Well, it depends as I am always patient with the children and I can get along well with them.

这里的时态应该使用一般现在时，表示习惯性动作。'I'm always'是正确的，但'depends as I always'结构不正确，应改为'depends as I am always'。另外，'stay well with them'表达不自然，应该用'get along well with them'表示相处融洽。

× But when there's something that I have to wait a lot of time, I may be very impatient because I hate waiting.

✓ But when there's something that I have to wait for a long time, I may be very impatient because I hate waiting.

动词'wait'后面需要加介词'for'来引出等待的对象或时间，缺少'for'导致介词使用错误。

× Well, the the things that I have spent a lot of time waiting for them, for example, when I have to queue in queue for the for something or when there's a traffic jam, I would be very impatient because I think they're really wasting my time.

✓ Well, the things that I have spent a lot of time waiting for, for example, when I have to queue for something or when there's a traffic jam, I would be very impatient because I think they're really wasting my time.

'waiting for them'中'for them'多余，应直接用'waiting for'。'queue in queue for the for something'结构混乱，应改为'queue for something'。介词使用不当导致表达不清。

× If I'm interested in the thing that I have to do for a long time, I may be very happy and very patient about this.

✓ If I'm interested in the thing that I have to do for a long time, I may be very happy and very patient about it.

'patient about this'中的'this'指代不明确，通常用'patient about it'更自然。介词搭配需要注意。

× Well, as a student I must be very impatient about my schoolwork because I have to calm myself down and be patient about the homework to avoid making mistakes.

✓ Well, as a student I must be very patient with my schoolwork because I have to calm myself down and be patient with the homework to avoid making mistakes.

'impatient about my schoolwork'与上下文矛盾，应为'patient with my schoolwork'。'patient with'是固定搭配，表示对某事有耐心。

× Yes, of course, when I was a child I often got impatient and anxious and I really can't calm down when doing the competitive things.

✓ Yes, of course, when I was a child I often got impatient and anxious and I really couldn't calm down when doing competitive things.

句中时态应保持一致，描述过去的情况应使用过去时，'can't'应改为'couldn't'。

× when doing the competitive things.

✓ when doing competitive things.

'competitive things'前不需要定冠词'the'，且'competitive things'表达更自然。

× But now I can control my mood better and I feel more patient about everything.

✓ But now I can control my mood better and I feel more patient with everything.

'patient about'用法不当，正确搭配是'patient with'，表示对某事有耐心。