Patience— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý không được truyền đạt tự nhiên và hiệu quả. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng cấu trúc câu chính xác hơn.

例: Yes, I consider myself a patient person because I rarely lose my temper. However, I do get annoyed when people cut in line or make me wait for a long time.

提案: Bạn nên sử dụng thì đúng và câu trả lời cần rõ ràng hơn. Ngoài ra, hãy dùng từ nối để làm câu trả lời mạch lạc và thêm chi tiết cụ thể hơn để làm câu trả lời sinh động.

例: I usually don't feel impatient, but once I had to wait a long time to be seated at a popular restaurant. Then, someone cut the line, which really annoyed me because it was unfair.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự mạch lạc và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời rõ ràng, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp để diễn đạt cảm xúc của mình.

例: When I have to do something easy for a long time, I can finish it quickly without any problem. However, if the task is difficult or complicated, I often feel frustrated and tired.

提案: Bạn nên sử dụng cấu trúc câu chính xác hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp và cung cấp ví dụ cụ thể để câu trả lời thêm thuyết phục.

例: Yes, my job definitely requires patience because I often have to deal with difficult customers and challenging tasks. Therefore, patience is an important skill for me and my colleagues.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và thiếu sự rõ ràng. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và cấu trúc câu chính xác để diễn đạt ý tưởng.

例: Not really. When I was a child, life was simpler and I didn't have to deal with difficult situations. Now, I face many challenging tasks and homework, which sometimes make me less patient.

× even when someone get me waiting so long are the cutting line with them

✓ even when someone gets me waiting so long or cuts in line with them

The verb 'get' should be in third person singular form 'gets' to agree with the singular subject 'someone'. Also, 'are the cutting line' is incorrect; it should be 'or cuts in line' to express the intended meaning clearly.

× I'm not really felt impatient

✓ I haven't really felt impatient

The present perfect tense 'haven't really felt' is appropriate here to indicate an experience up to now. 'I'm not really felt' is grammatically incorrect because 'felt' is a past participle and cannot follow 'am' directly.

× someone suddenly caught the line

✓ someone suddenly cut the line

The correct past tense verb for interrupting a queue is 'cut' (cut, cut, cut), not 'caught'. 'Cut the line' is an idiomatic expression meaning to skip ahead in a queue.

× when the when I need to do something that's easy, I just do it easily and I just fly

✓ when I need to do something that's easy, I just do it easily and I just fly

The phrase 'when the when' is redundant and should be simplified to 'when'. This improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I feel so difficult

✓ I feel so frustrated

'Difficult' is an adjective describing things, not feelings. To express a feeling, an adjective like 'frustrated' is appropriate.

× everybody that who is my colleague need to learn

✓ everybody who is my colleague needs to learn

'Everybody' is singular and requires the singular verb 'needs'. Also, 'that who' is incorrect; 'who' alone is sufficient.

× to do difficult task

✓ to do difficult tasks

The noun 'task' should be plural 'tasks' to agree with the context implying multiple tasks.

× I think everyone just have this, just learn how to

✓ I think everyone just has this, just learns how to

'Everyone' is singular and requires singular verbs 'has' and 'learns'.

× when it was such a child life so superior

✓ when I was a child, life was so easy

The original sentence is unclear and ungrammatical. 'When I was a child' is the correct phrase, and 'life was so easy' conveys the intended meaning more naturally.

× I don't need to handle with difficult situation

✓ I didn't need to handle difficult situations

The verb 'handle' does not require the preposition 'with'. Also, past tense 'didn't need' fits the context better, and 'situations' should be plural.

× I need to face with a challenging task and homework

✓ I need to face a challenging task and homework

The verb 'face' does not require the preposition 'with'. Removing 'with' makes the sentence correct.