Patience— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时语法和表达不够准确，存在重复和用词错误，建议简化句子结构，避免重复表达，并注意词汇的正确使用，如'anxiety'应为形容词'anxious'。

例: I am not very patient because I often feel anxious when I face problems alone. For example, if something goes wrong at work, I get frustrated quickly. Therefore, I think I need to improve my patience.

提案: 回答表达混乱，句子不完整且有语法错误，建议先理清思路，使用简单明了的句子直接回答问题，并用具体例子支持。

例: I feel impatient when I have to solve problems by myself but cannot find a good solution. For example, if I face a difficult situation that I cannot resolve, I feel anxious and impatient.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和词汇使用不当，如'boring'应为'bored'，'very low, very dual'表达不清，建议使用准确词汇并简洁表达感受。

例: I feel bored, frustrated, and exhausted when I have to do something for a long time because it is tedious and takes up a lot of my time.

提案: 回答中有重复和语法错误，如'research researches'重复，'keeping patient'表达不自然，建议使用更地道的表达并避免重复。

例: Yes, my studies require me to be patient because I often face challenges in assignments and research. I need to stay patient to solve these problems effectively.

提案: 回答不连贯且有语法错误，重复表达，建议简洁明了地比较现在和过去的耐心程度，并用具体原因支持。

例: I am more patient now than when I was a child. I was naive and less focused before, so I couldn't handle problems well. Now, I can concentrate better and be more patient.

× I often feel nervous and anxiety.

✓ I often feel nervous and anxious.

这里'nervous'是形容词，'anxiety'是名词，两个词性不一致，应该用形容词'anxious'来与'nervous'保持一致。

× I would say the things I could I could vote by myself may be very impatient because I couldn't to resolve it well.

✓ I would say the things I could handle by myself may make me very impatient because I couldn't resolve them well.

原句中'vote'用错，应该是'handle'或类似动词；'couldn't to resolve'中'to'多余，应去掉；'things'复数，后面指代应用复数形式'them'。

× So I have an obstacle to go through this way.

✓ So I have an obstacle to get through this way.

短语'go through'通常用于经历某事，'get through'更适合表达克服障碍。

× if I have some situations or problems I can't resolve, I will feel anxiety.

✓ if I have some situations or problems I can't resolve, I will feel anxious.

'feel anxiety'中'anxiety'是名词，应该用形容词'anxious'来描述感受。

× I will feel a little bit boring, frustrated or exhausted when I have some things I need to do for a long time.

✓ I will feel a little bit bored, frustrated or exhausted when I have some things I need to do for a long time.

'boring'是形容词，表示使人感到无聊，'bored'表示感到无聊的状态，句中应使用'bored'。

× Because I think the things which I need to do a long time is very low, very dual and tedious because it's cost a lot of my time.

✓ Because I think the things which I need to do for a long time are very dull and tedious because they cost a lot of my time.

'low'用错，应为'dull'（无聊的）；'dual'错误，应为'dull'；'things'复数，谓语动词应用'are'；'it's cost'错误，应为'they cost'。

× I need to deal with the problems which appear in the assignments and research researches.

✓ I need to deal with the problems which appear in the assignments and research.

'research'是不可数名词，不能用复数形式'researches'。

× I could I could deal with my deal with my problem.

✓ I couldn't deal with my problem.

原句重复且错误，正确表达应为'I couldn't deal with my problem.'。

× I couldn't deal with my problem with concentrate on.

✓ I couldn't deal with my problem with concentration.

'concentrate on'是动词短语，名词形式应为'concentration'，用作介词宾语。