Patience— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答不够连贯，语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，使用正确的时态和人称。

例: No, I am not a patient person. For example, when I help my sister with her homework, I get frustrated if she doesn't understand after several explanations.

提案: 回答内容混乱，语法错误严重，难以理解。建议明确表达原因，使用简单句子，避免错误的动词形式。

例: I feel impatient when I have to explain something many times but the other person still doesn't understand.

提案: 表达不自然，部分词汇使用错误，句子不完整。建议使用更准确的词汇和完整句子表达感受。

例: I feel nervous and tired when I have to do something for a long time. I prefer to take a break and do something fun.

提案: 回答不够清晰，语法和词汇错误较多。建议明确表达学习化学需要耐心，使用正确的词汇和句子结构。

例: I don't have a job, but studying chemistry requires a lot of patience, especially during practical experiments.

提案: 表达不够流畅，语法错误影响理解。建议使用更自然的表达方式，清楚比较现在和过去的耐心程度。

例: To be honest, I am less patient now than when I was a child because I have more stress and less time to explain things repeatedly.

× if I teach a lot of times but they don't know every man and don't want to talk, taught her again.

✓ if I teach a lot of times but they don't understand and don't want to talk, I teach her again.

这里的'taught'是过去式，但句子中描述的是习惯性动作，应该用一般现在时'teach'。另外，'don't know every man'表达不清，改为'don't understand'更合适。

× If I need to taught my teacher, he taught my sister her housework and I chose anything but they still don't understand and I can't come up and repeat, she told her.

✓ If I need to teach my teacher, he teaches my sister her housework and I choose anything but they still don't understand and I can't come up and repeat, she tells her.

'taught'和'chose'是过去式，但句子描述的是现在的情况，应使用一般现在时'teach'和'choose'。

× I feel nervous and I can climb down to do this.

✓ I feel nervous and I can't calm down to do this.

'climb down'用法错误，正确表达应为'calm down'表示冷静下来。

× And I want to to play something and I don't want to do that.

✓ And I want to play something and I don't want to do that.

多余的'to'应删除，'want to to play'应为'want to play'。

× but the starting time need the patient because you know, I learned the chemical.

✓ but the starting time needs patience because you know, I learned chemistry.

'time'是单数，谓语动词应加's'变为'needs'。'patient'应为名词形式'patience'。

× Chemical is very difficult and especially the practice, you need to be more patient because you need to have many.

✓ Chemistry is very difficult and especially the practice, you need to be more patient because you need to have a lot of it.

'Chemical'应为学科名词'Chemistry'。'have many'不完整，需补充名词，如'a lot of it'。

× To be honest, no, why would the child? I don't have many stress so if someone asked me something I was very pleasure to talk them more times, but now I'm not.

✓ To be honest, no, when I was a child, I didn't have much stress so if someone asked me something I was very pleased to talk to them many times, but now I'm not.

'why would the child'表达不清，改为'when I was a child'。'many stress'应为' much stress'。'was very pleasure'应为'was very pleased'。'talk them'应为'talk to them'。