Patience— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答较为自然且内容具体，但存在语法错误（如“the letter”应为“the latter”）和重复表达（“long long line”）。建议注意词汇拼写和避免冗余表达。

例: Not really. I'm quite impatient because I dislike waiting in long queues. For example, when I go out for lunch, I usually choose a less crowded restaurant rather than a famous one with a long line.

提案: 回答内容具体且结构清晰，但存在语法错误（“makes”应为“make”）和拼写错误（“AVIP”应为“VIP”）。建议注意主谓一致和单词拼写。

例: Long waiting times definitely make me feel impatient. For instance, last year at Chang Wildlife Park, I waited two hours for a small train ride and eventually bought a VIP ticket to skip the line.

提案: 回答表达不够自然，存在语法错误（“bore it”应为“bored”），且句子连接不够流畅。建议使用更自然的表达和连接词。

例: At first, I feel frustrated and bored. Eventually, I might feel hopeless and even angry. For example, whenever I visit the doctor in the emergency room, the long wait really gets me down.

提案: 回答内容相关且结构合理，但存在语法错误（“take responsible”应为“take responsibility”）和表达不够流畅。建议注意固定搭配和句子连贯。

例: Yes, it absolutely does. As a nurse, I need a lot of patience because I am responsible for my patients and must stay calm and understanding even in tough and urgent situations.

提案: 回答表达不够完整且有语法错误（“the patient”应为“patience”），句子结构不完整。建议使用完整句子并注意词汇准确。

例: Yes, definitely. I am more patient now than when I was a child. Both my job and being a parent have taught me that patience is very important in life.

× I would prefer to choose the restaurant with fewer customers rather than the crowded one with a long long line, even if the letter is much more famous.

✓ I would prefer to choose the restaurant with fewer customers rather than the crowded one with a long long line, even if the latter is much more famous.

这里的“letter”应为“latter”，表示“后者”，是一个常见的拼写错误。

× Definitely long waiting times makes me feel impatient.

✓ Definitely long waiting times make me feel impatient.

主语“long waiting times”是复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式“make”，而不是“makes”。

× I couldn't take it anymore and ended up buying AVIP ticket just to skip the line.

✓ I couldn't take it anymore and ended up buying an AVIP ticket just to skip the line.

“AVIP ticket”前缺少冠词“an”，因为“ticket”是可数名词，单数形式前需要冠词。

× At first I would feel frustrated and bore it.

✓ At first I would feel frustrated and bear it.

动词“bore”是过去式，句中应使用动词原形“bear”表示“忍受”。

× every time I visit doctor in emergency room, I have to wait a long time, which really gets me down.

✓ Every time I visit the doctor in the emergency room, I have to wait a long time, which really gets me down.

“visit doctor”应为“visit the doctor”，需要加定冠词“the”；“in emergency room”应为“in the emergency room”，同样需要定冠词。

× As a nurse I need a lot of patience because I might take responsible for my patients and understanding and stay calm even though in tough and acute situations.

✓ As a nurse, I need a lot of patience because I might be responsible for my patients and need to understand and stay calm even in tough and acute situations.

句子结构混乱，缺少动词“be”使“take responsible”不正确，应为“be responsible”；“understanding”应改为动词形式“need to understand”；“even though in”应改为“even in”。

× I'm more patient than I was a child.

✓ I'm more patient than I was as a child.

缺少介词“as”来表示“作为一个孩子”的意思。

× All of those teach me the patient is much more important in my life.

✓ All of those teach me that patience is much more important in my life.

“the patient”应为“patience”，名词形式表示“耐心”；缺少连词“that”引导宾语从句。