Patience— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够自然。建议使用更准确的时态和表达方式，如将“I’m always pursued the efficiency”改为“I always pursue efficiency”。同时，回答应更简洁，避免多余的词汇。

例: Actually, I don't think I'm a patient person because I always pursue efficiency in my life.

提案: 回答不完整且表达混乱，缺少具体细节。建议明确说明让你感到不耐烦的具体情况，并使用连贯的句子表达。

例: Many things make me feel impatient, for example, when I have to wait a long time to leave my dormitory because of delays.

提案: 语法错误影响表达效果，如“it will made me crazy”应为“it makes me crazy”。建议使用更自然的表达，并增加连接词使句子更流畅。

例: It makes me feel frustrated because I prefer to finish tasks quickly rather than spending a long time on them.

提案: 回答中断且语法混乱，表达不清晰。建议简洁明了地回答问题，并使用正确的虚拟语气表达假设。

例: Actually, I am a student now, but if I were working, I would need to be a patient person.

提案: 回答中有语法和用词错误，如“We will definitely”应为“Yes, definitely”。建议使用更准确的表达，并注意句子结构的完整性。

例: Yes, definitely. I think I am more patient now than when I was a child because as I grow up, I have more responsibilities to handle.

× I'm always pursued the efficiency in my life.

✓ I always pursue efficiency in my life.

这里使用了过去式 pursued，但句子表达的是习惯性动作，应该用一般现在时 pursue。'I'm always' 结构不正确，应改为 'I always'。

× if I need to go out the dorm and my dormitories always.

✓ if I need to go out of the dorm, and my dormitory is always...

句子结构不完整，缺少谓语动词，且 'go out the dorm' 应为 'go out of the dorm'，'dormitories' 应为单数 'dormitory'，需要补充完整句子。

× While it will made me crazy, I'm not a person who likes to do things in a long time.

✓ While it makes me crazy, I'm not a person who likes to do things for a long time.

'will made' 是错误的时态和形式，应为一般现在时 'makes'，表示习惯性动作。'in a long time' 应改为 'for a long time'，表示持续时间。

× I need to be a patient woman.

✓ I would need to be a patient woman.

这里是假设语气，应该用情态动词 'would' 表示假设条件。

× I think I'm patient, more patient than I was a child.

✓ I think I'm more patient than I was a child.

'patient, more patient' 结构重复，应合并为 'more patient'。比较级后面缺少介词 'than'，且 'was a child' 应为 'was when I was a child' 或简化为 'was a child'，此处保留原意。