Patience— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时语法错误较多，表达不够自然，且有重复和冗余。建议注意时态和主谓一致，避免重复表达，并尝试使用更丰富的词汇来描述自己的耐心程度。

例: No, I don't consider myself a patient person. For example, when I wait for my food, I often check my phone or the time because I get restless quickly. My friends often tease me for getting frustrated in long queues, so patience is definitely not my strong point.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，且逻辑连接不够流畅。建议使用正确的时态和句型，避免语法错误，并用连接词使表达更连贯。

例: There are many things that make me impatient, but the worst is when the internet is slow. For instance, if a video buffers or a page doesn't load quickly, I feel very frustrated because I am used to fast internet nowadays.

提案: 回答结构较好，但部分表达不够准确，且句子衔接可以更自然。建议注意句子结构和词汇使用，使用更多连接词使表达更流畅。

例: When I have to do something for a long time, I usually get distracted at first. However, I remind myself of the purpose and try to complete the task step by step. Each time I finish a part, I reward myself, which helps me stay motivated.

提案: 回答内容具体且相关，但语法和表达有待改进。建议注意主谓一致和时态，使用更准确的词汇表达职业需求。

例: Yes, as a social work student, patience is essential. Clients often need time to process information, and it's important not to rush them. I have also learned to stay calm and listen carefully, which is very important in this field.

提案: 回答表达不够清晰，语法错误较多，逻辑关系不明确。建议理清思路，使用简单明了的句子表达对比，并注意语法正确。

例: Actually, I was more patient as a child because I had less pressure and didn't have to worry about many things. Now, as I get older, I often feel that there is not enough time, which makes me less patient.

× My my friends was always laugh at me that I always get frustrated when I waiting in a long queue.

✓ My friends were always laughing at me because I always get frustrated when I am waiting in a long queue.

这里“friends”是复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式“were”。此外，“laugh”应使用进行时“laughing”，表示持续动作。

× My my friends was always laugh at me that I always get frustrated when I waiting in a long queue.

✓ My friends were always laughing at me because I always get frustrated when I am waiting in a long queue.

动词“wait”在表示正在进行的动作时，应使用动名词形式“waiting”，并且需要加上助动词“am”构成现在进行时。

× Maybe because today's everythings are so far so, so I cannot get used to it for a long time.

✓ Maybe because today's everything is so fast, so I cannot get used to it for a long time.

“everythings”是错误的复数形式，正确应为不可数名词“everything”。此外，“far”应为“fast”，表示速度快。

× Maybe because today's everythings are so far so, so I cannot get used to it for a long time.

✓ Maybe because today's everything is so fast, so I cannot get used to it for a long time.

“everything”是不可数名词，谓语动词应使用单数形式“is”。

× Whenever the page or video is buffering or the page cannot loading, I feel so frustrated and annoying.

✓ Whenever the page or video is buffering or the page cannot load, I feel so frustrated and annoyed.

“cannot loading”应改为“cannot load”，因为“cannot”后接动词原形。形容词“annoying”应改为“annoyed”，表示感受。

× Whenever the page or video is buffering or the page cannot loading, I feel so frustrated and annoying.

✓ Whenever the page or video is buffering or the page cannot load, I feel so frustrated and annoyed.

“annoying”是形容词，表示使人烦恼的；这里应使用“annoyed”，表示感到烦恼的状态。

× Actually I was more patient when I was a child because when time back then I know that line no pain, no pressure and no need worry to ma many things and so I don't need to be rushed or multitask.

✓ Actually I was more patient when I was a child because back then I knew that no pain, no pressure and no need to worry about many things, so I didn't need to be rushed or multitask.

“when time back then”表达不正确，应为“back then”。“need worry to”应为“need to worry about”。

× Actually I was more patient when I was a child because when time back then I know that line no pain, no pressure and no need worry to ma many things and so I don't need to be rushed or multitask.

✓ Actually I was more patient when I was a child because back then I knew that no pain, no pressure and no need to worry about many things, so I didn't need to be rushed or multitask.

描述过去的事情时，动词应使用过去时态，如“know”应改为“knew”，“don't need”应改为“didn't need”。