Patience— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答较为自然且内容丰富，但存在语法错误和表达不够简洁的问题。建议注意句子结构，避免重复表达，并使用更准确的词汇。

例: No, I am not a patient person. For example, I often get frustrated when I have to wait in long queues, even if it's just for a few minutes. My friends often tease me about this because I tend to check the time frequently.

提案: 回答中存在语法和用词错误，表达不够清晰。建议加强句子结构的准确性，使用恰当的词汇，并避免语法错误。

例: There are many things that make me impatient, but the worst is when the internet is slow. For instance, when videos keep buffering or pages fail to load, I feel very frustrated because nowadays everything happens so quickly that waiting feels unbearable.

提案: 回答内容较完整，但语法和表达不够准确。建议理清句子结构，使用连接词使表达更连贯，并注意时态一致。

例: When I have to do something for a long time, I usually feel frustrated at first. However, I remind myself why I need to finish the task, then I take it step by step. Whenever I complete a part, I reward myself, which helps me stay motivated.

提案: 回答内容相关且有条理，但存在语法错误和重复表达。建议简化句子，避免重复，并使用更准确的词汇。

例: Yes, my studies in social work require a lot of patience. For example, I need to give clients enough time to process information and respond without rushing them. Therefore, patience is essential in my field.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题。建议注意句子结构，避免重复和语法错误，并使用连接词使表达更流畅。

例: Actually, I think I was more patient as a child because I had no pressure or deadlines. I had plenty of time and didn't need to rush or multitask. However, as I grew older, I often feel that there is never enough time.

× My friends always laugh at me that I always get frustrated or annoying when waiting, you know, long queue.

✓ My friends always laugh at me because I always get frustrated or annoyed when waiting, you know, in a long queue.

这里“annoying”是形容词，意思是“令人烦恼的”，但句子中应使用形容词“annoyed”表示“感到烦恼的”，同时“long queue”前应加介词“in a”表示“在排长队”。

× Every time when I sing the video, keep offering or the page cannot load, I just feel so frustrated.

✓ Every time when I watch the video, it keeps buffering or the page cannot load, I just feel so frustrated.

“sing the video”应为“watch the video”，且“keep offering”应为“keeps buffering”，表示视频缓冲。这里动词形式错误，需用正确的动词和-ing形式。

× Maybe just today's everything are so fast, so I cannot get used to wait for the long time.

✓ Maybe nowadays everything is so fast, so I cannot get used to waiting for a long time.

“get used to”后应接动名词形式“waiting”，而不是动词原形“wait”。“the long time”应改为“a long time”，表示“一段长时间”。

× Well, at first I may get frustrated or distracted, but after that I often told myself that why I need to finish that and I take it step by step and whenever I finish one of that I will reward myself.

✓ Well, at first I may get frustrated or distracted, but after that I often tell myself why I need to finish that and I take it step by step, and whenever I finish one of those I reward myself.

“told”应为现在时“tell”，因为前面用的是一般现在时态描述习惯动作。句中“one of that”应为“one of those”，指代复数中的一个。

× Yes, as I mentioned, I'm studying in social work, so being a social work patient is so important.

✓ Yes, as I mentioned, I'm studying social work, so being a patient social worker is very important.

“being a social work patient”表达不正确，应为“being a patient social worker”，即“有耐心的社会工作者”。

× You always need to give your client time to process, give them time to react and I cannot push them to to push them.

✓ You always need to give your clients time to process, give them time to react and I cannot push them.

“client”应为复数“clients”，因为后文用“them”指代复数。重复“to push them”应删除。

× Well, actually I think I was more patient when I was a child because you back back then I no pressure, have a lot of time, I've no deadlines and I don't need to rush or multitask.

✓ Well, actually I think I was more patient when I was a child because back then I had no pressure, had a lot of time, had no deadlines and didn't need to rush or multitask.

描述过去情况时，动词应使用过去时态，如“had”而非“have”，“didn't need”而非“don't need”。