Patience— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时应避免重复表达“lose my temper”，并且句子结构应更自然流畅。可以简化并直接表达观点，同时补充具体例子。

例: No, I'm not very patient. For instance, when I make mistakes, I often get frustrated because I can't always identify what went wrong.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和重复词汇，应注意单复数和避免重复。建议用更具体的细节说明原因，并使用连接词使表达更连贯。

例: Several things make me impatient. For example, when I remind my brother to do his homework but he ignores me, I feel frustrated because he doesn't take it seriously.

提案: 回答中表达不清且有语法错误，建议用更准确的词汇和句式表达观点，并避免口语化的犹豫词。

例: I find it difficult to focus on long-term projects because I prefer short tasks. Therefore, I usually ask my friends or teachers for advice on how to manage my time better.

提案: 回答较完整，但有重复词汇和语法错误。建议简化表达，避免重复，并用连接词使句子更流畅。

例: I'm a student, but as a biology major, I often do experiments that require patience. If I become impatient, I might make mistakes and fail the experiment.

提案: 回答中表达不够自然，且逻辑有些混乱。建议直接回答问题，并用具体例子说明耐心的重要性。

例: No, I am not more patient than when I was a child. However, through years of study, I have learned that being patient helps me perform better in my tasks.

× There are quite a few thing that makes me feel impatient.

✓ There are quite a few things that make me feel impatient.

这里的主语是复数形式的"things"，谓语动词也应使用复数形式"make"，而不是单数形式"makes"。此外，"thing"应改为复数形式"things"。

× I always remind my brother to do his homework but but he didn't listen to me at all so I think he he didn't take his attention seriously.

✓ I always remind my brother to do his homework but he doesn't listen to me at all so I think he doesn't pay attention seriously.

"he didn't listen"时态不符合上下文，描述习惯性动作应使用一般现在时"doesn't listen"。"didn't take his attention seriously"表达不准确，应改为"doesn't pay attention seriously"。

× So I will maybe I will ask for my friend or teacher.

✓ So maybe I will ask my friend or teacher.

"ask for my friend"表达不正确，应该是"ask my friend"。此外，"will maybe I will"重复，应简化为"maybe I will"。

× If you become impatient or frustrated, it's easy to mistake and fail the experiment.

✓ If you become impatient or frustrated, it's easy to make mistakes and fail the experiment.

"mistake"作为名词时应使用复数形式"mistakes"，且此处应使用动词短语"make mistakes"。

× After a long time study from the primary school to the university, I have known that patience is a very important value for a person because you can do something better when you become patient.

✓ After studying for a long time from primary school to university, I have known that patience is a very important value for a person because you can do something better when you become patient.

"After a long time study"结构不正确，应改为"After studying for a long time"，使用动名词形式表示持续的动作。