Patience— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时应更自然流畅，避免使用“a little patient”这种不太地道的表达。可以直接说“I am somewhat patient”或“I consider myself patient to some extent”。此外，回答可以更简洁，避免重复表达。

例: Yes, I consider myself somewhat patient because I can wait calmly when something is important, but I do get frustrated if the wait is too long.

提案: 回答内容具体且相关，但可以使用连接词使句子更连贯，例如“for example”或“also”。此外，可以丰富词汇，避免重复使用“impatient”和“upset”。

例: I feel impatient when public transport like buses or taxis are late; for example, waiting for a long time can be frustrating. Also, slow Internet connection really annoys me.

提案: 回答中有拼写错误（'tax'应为'task'），影响表达清晰度。建议注意拼写准确性，并使用连接词如“however”来增强句子逻辑。

例: I feel bored and sometimes tired if the task is not interesting; however, if I enjoy the activity, I don't notice the time passing.

提案: 回答结构清晰，但可以使用更多连接词如“because”来解释原因，使表达更自然流畅。

例: Yes, my job requires me to be patient because I have to handle various complicated tasks, and without patience, I can't concentrate and might fail to complete them.

提案: 回答简洁明了，但可以通过添加连接词如“because”或“so”来使句子更连贯，同时丰富词汇。

例: Yes, I have become more patient because when I was a child, I wanted everything quickly, so now I try to stay calm and wait.

× I think I'm a little patient.

✓ I think I'm a bit patient.

这里的little用来修饰形容词patient不太合适，应该用副词短语a bit来表达“有点”的意思。

× I feel bored if the tax is not interesting and sometimes I get tired, but if I enjoy the activity I don't notice the time.

✓ I feel bored if the task is not interesting and sometimes I get tired, but if I enjoy the activity I don't notice the time.

原句中'tax'应为'task'，这是拼写错误，导致句子意思不明确。

× I also don't like slow Internet, it really makes me upset.

✓ I also don't like slow Internet because it really makes me upset.

原句中两个独立分句用逗号连接，构成逗号拼接错误，应使用连词because连接，表达因果关系更清晰。