Patience— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时语法和表达不够准确，句子结构较复杂且有重复，建议简化句子结构，避免重复表达，并注意语法正确性。

例: Yes, I consider myself a patient person, especially when I work or study and listen to others carefully. However, I can become impatient if I have to wait for a long time without any explanation.

提案: 回答中存在重复词汇和表达不清晰的问题，建议使用更准确的词汇表达原因，并避免重复。

例: I feel impatient when I have to wait for a long time without any explanation because it feels meaningless, which makes me frustrated and upset.

提案: 回答内容较好，但有语法错误和词汇使用不当，建议注意形容词和名词的正确形式，并使用连接词使表达更流畅。

例: It depends on the task. If it is engaging and interesting, I find it challenging and motivating. However, if it is repetitive, I tend to feel bored and tired after a while.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和重复，建议简化句子结构，注意冠词和词形变化，避免重复表达。

例: Yes, when I worked as an accountant a few months ago, I needed to be very patient because I had to enter data carefully and double-check it to avoid mistakes. Patience was essential in that job.

提案: 回答简洁明了，但可以增加连接词使表达更连贯，同时丰富细节使回答更具体。

例: Yes, of course. I have become more patient now. When I was a child, I wanted everything quickly, but now I try to stay calm and wait patiently for things to happen.

× I consider myself as a patient person when it comes to do my work and study and listen to other people carefully.

✓ I consider myself a patient person when it comes to doing my work, studying, and listening to other people carefully.

动词短语 'when it comes to' 后面应接动名词形式，因此 'do' 应改为 'doing'，'study' 改为 'studying'，'listen' 改为 'listening'。此外，'consider myself as' 中的 'as' 不需要，应去掉。

× However, if it comes to if I have to wait for a very long time without any explanation, I can.

✓ However, if I have to wait for a very long time without any explanation, I can't.

句子结构混乱，重复使用 'if it comes to if' 不合适，且句尾 'I can' 不完整，缺少谓语，应该改为 'I can't' 表达不耐烦的意思。

× if I have to wait for a very long time without any explanation explanation or I feel the victim is meaningless, I tend to lose my passion and feel really frustrated and upset.

✓ If I have to wait for a very long time without any explanation or I feel the situation is meaningless, I tend to lose my passion and feel really frustrated and upset.

原句中 'victim' 用词错误，应为 'situation' 或 'event'，且重复了 'explanation'。

× If the task is engaging and interesting, I find it challenging and motivative, but if it's a repetitive, I tend to feel bored and tired after a while.

✓ If the task is engaging and interesting, I find it challenging and motivating, but if it's repetitive, I tend to feel bored and tired after a while.

'Motivative' 不是正确的单词，应为 'motivating'；'a repetitive' 用法错误，'repetitive' 是形容词，前面不应加冠词 'a'。

× Yes, the job I did a few months ago as an accountant, I really need patient because you need to put in every data every carefully and double check it to avoid mistake.

✓ Yes, the job I did a few months ago as an accountant really needed patience because you need to enter every piece of data very carefully and double-check it to avoid mistakes.

'Need patient' 应为 'need patience'，'every data' 应为 'every piece of data'，'every carefully' 应为 'very carefully'，'avoid mistake' 应为复数 'avoid mistakes'。

× So being patient, being patient in in that job is really essential.

✓ So being patient in that job is really essential.

重复使用 'being patient' 和 'in'，应删除多余部分。

× Yes, the job I did a few months ago as an accountant, I really need patient because you need to put in every data every carefully and double check it to avoid mistake.

✓ Yes, the job I did a few months ago as an accountant really needed patience because you need to enter every piece of data very carefully and double-check it to avoid mistakes.

动词时态应与过去时间状语一致，'did' 表示过去，后面应使用过去时 'needed'。

× I really need patient because you need to put in every data every carefully and double check it to avoid mistake.

✓ I really needed patience because you need to enter every piece of data very carefully and double-check it to avoid mistakes.

前半句描述过去的工作，应使用过去时态 'needed'，而后半句描述普遍事实，保持现在时态。

× When I was a child I wanted everything quickly, but now I try to stay calm and wait.

✓ When I was a child, I wanted everything quickly, but now I try to stay calm and wait patiently.

'Wait' 后面缺少副词 'patiently'，使句子更完整自然。