Patience— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在较多语气词和重复，影响流畅性。建议减少填充词，简洁表达观点，并使用连接词使回答更连贯。

例: Yes, I consider myself a patient person because when I do my homework or assessments, I pay close attention to details. This requires patience and carefulness to ensure quality work.

提案: 回答表达不够清晰，语法和用词有误。建议使用更准确的表达，避免重复，并用连接词组织句子。

例: I feel impatient in emergency situations, especially when I have to wait in long queues or when a deadline is approaching quickly.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议简化句子结构，明确表达感受，并用连接词衔接观点。

例: I usually feel nervous when I have to do something for a long time because I prefer challenging and interesting tasks that keep me engaged.

提案: 回答中存在语法和用词错误，表达不够准确。建议使用正确的词汇和句式，清晰描述工作内容和耐心的重要性。

例: Yes, my job as an exhibition designer requires patience because I need to observe visitors' reactions carefully and adjust the exhibition accordingly.

提案: 回答结构混乱，语法错误较多。建议先明确回答，再用具体原因支持，并使用连接词使表达连贯。

例: I am definitely more patient now than when I was a child because working in society exposes me to various situations that require calmness and understanding.

× when I do my homework and assessment, I will pay more attention to, uh, on it.

✓ when I do my homework and assessment, I will pay more attention to it.

介词'to'后面不需要再加'on'，这是介词使用错误。应直接用'to it'。

× So, uh, it's need your patience and uh, you, uh, take care of them.

✓ So, uh, it needs your patience and you take care of them.

动词'need'应使用第三人称单数形式'needs'，且句子结构不完整，需调整。

× Maybe it's on the emergency situation such as I have to wait a long queues such as the some situation like it's close to the deadline.

✓ Maybe it's in emergency situations such as when I have to wait in long queues or in situations like when it's close to the deadline.

'situation'应为复数'situations'，'a long queues'中'a'与复数'queues'不匹配，且介词使用错误。

× Maybe it's on the emergency situation such as I have to wait a long queues such as the some situation like it's close to the deadline.

✓ Maybe it's in emergency situations such as when I have to wait in long queues or in situations like when it's close to the deadline.

介词'on'用错，应使用'in'表示处于某种情况中。

× Maybe it will let me be more and nervous because you know, do have to do some something for a long time.

✓ Maybe it will make me more nervous because, you know, having to do something for a long time.

'let me be more and nervous'结构错误，应使用'make me more nervous'。

× It's very hard for people because I prefer the challenging jobs and my interest things.

✓ It's very hard for people because I prefer challenging jobs and things that interest me.

'my interest things'表达不正确，应改为'things that interest me'。

× So in this process I need to pay more attention to the visitor phase change and the emotional flexion.

✓ So in this process I need to pay more attention to the visitors' phase changes and emotional fluctuations.

'visitor phase change'和'emotional flexion'表达不准确，应使用复数形式和正确词汇。

× So it's need your patient and careful to take care of their.

✓ So it needs your patience and carefulness to take care of them.

'patient'应为名词'patience'，'careful'应为名词'carefulness'，'their'用错，应为'them'。

× So it's need your patient and careful to take care of their.

✓ So it needs your patience and carefulness to take care of them.

'their'是形容词性物主代词，后面应接名词，句中应使用宾格代词'them'。

× I would say definitely changed in recent years because when we get into the society work, I have to face the different situation and things, so if I don't have the patient emotion, something will.

✓ I would say I have definitely changed in recent years because when we enter society and work, I have to face different situations and things, so if I don't have patience, it will be difficult.

'patient emotion'表达错误，应为'patience'，句子结构不完整，需补充完整。

× when we get into the society work

✓ when we enter society and work

'get into the society work'介词和表达不自然，应改为'enter society and work'。

× so if I don't have the patient emotion, something will.

✓ so if I don't have patience, it will be difficult.

句子不完整，缺少谓语和宾语，需补充完整表达。