Patience— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和重复，建议简化句子结构，避免重复表达，并使用更自然的表达方式。

例: Yes, I consider myself a patient person, especially when working with my colleagues.

提案: 句子结构不完整且表达不够清晰，建议使用连词连接句子，并明确表达原因。

例: I feel impatient when I arrive early for dinner but my friend is very late.

提案: 使用了错误的词汇（brawling），建议使用正确的词汇表达情绪，并使句子更连贯。

例: I feel a bit bored when I have to do something for a long time, but I feel happy if I can complete it successfully.

提案: 句子表达混乱且不连贯，建议简化句子，明确说明工作内容和耐心的原因。

例: Yes, my job requires patience because I need to communicate with teachers regularly.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不清晰，建议使用简单句子清楚表达观点，并避免无关内容。

例: Yes, I am more patient now than when I was a child because I take time to calm myself before doing things and I am more understanding when talking with friends.

× When I am working, I always be patient with my with my colleagues.

✓ When I am working, I am always patient with my colleagues.

句子中“always be”用法错误，应该用现在时态的“am always”来表达习惯性动作。

× When my friend and I go out to have dinner, I get there earlier but my friend arrived there was so late I will feel impatient.

✓ When my friend and I go out to have dinner, I get there earlier but my friend arrives so late I feel impatient.

句子时态混乱，描述习惯性动作应使用一般现在时，且“arrived there was so late”结构不正确，应改为“arrives so late”。

× I feel a little brawling when I have to do something for a long time, but if I can do this thing well, I will feel cheerful.

✓ I feel a little bored when I have to do something for a long time, but if I can do this thing well, I will feel cheerful.

“brawling”是动名词，意思是“争吵”，此处应使用形容词“bored”表示“感到无聊”。

× Yes, my job requires me to be patient for the reason that my drone needs to communicate with each with some teachers and I must be patient to contact with them.

✓ Yes, my job requires me to be patient because my drone needs to communicate with some teachers and I must be patient when contacting them.

“for the reason that”表达不自然，改为“because”；“communicate with each with some teachers”结构错误，应去掉“each”；“patient to contact with them”应改为“patient when contacting them”，介词使用错误。

× Yes, I am more patient now than when I was a child because now I doing things I will sing at 1st and then I will do this thing.

✓ Yes, I am more patient now than when I was a child because now when I do things, I will sing first and then I will do the task.

“I doing things”缺少助动词，应为“I do things”；“sing at 1st”应为“sing first”，表达顺序错误。

× However my children wasn't instead.

✓ However, my children weren't.

“children”是复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式“weren't”，而不是单数“wasn't”。