Patience— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答较为自然，但句子较长且有些重复，建议简化表达，避免冗余，同时增加连接词使表达更流畅。

例: To be honest, I'm not very patient. For example, when I was a child, I would constantly ask my parents how long it would take to arrive at the shopping mall, which shows my impatience.

提案: 回答内容不够具体，且表达不够清晰，建议直接说明让你感到不耐烦的具体原因，并用连接词组织语言。

例: I feel impatient when I have to wait for a long time without knowing how long it will take, because uncertainty makes me anxious.

提案: 回答较具体，但句子结构有些混乱，建议简化句子并使用连接词使表达更连贯。

例: I feel exhausted when I have to do something for a long time. For example, I recently spent two hours writing a debate speech, and I felt very tired afterwards.

提案: 回答内容完整，但部分表达不够自然，建议使用更地道的表达方式，并注意句子简洁。

例: Yes, my job as a student requires patience. Sometimes, lessons are not very interesting, but I still need to pay attention and learn.

提案: 回答表达较好，但部分句子略显重复，建议简化语言并使用连接词使表达更流畅。

例: I am more patient now than when I was a child because I have become more sensible and can decide when to be patient.

× I was asking when we were there since the moment we went out of our house.

✓ I was asking when we would be there since the moment we went out of our house.

这里的时态使用不正确，'was asking'后面应该用将来时态表达期待的动作，故用'would be'。

× My job actually does require myself to be patient.

✓ My job actually does require me to be patient.

'require'后面应接宾格代词，不能用反身代词'myself'。

× So this means that I have more common sense and can make decisions to when to be patient or not.

✓ So this means that I have more common sense and can make decisions about when to be patient or not.

'decisions'后面应接介词'about'，而不是'to'。

× I believe that patience is decided from the time that people are born.

✓ I believe that patience is determined from the time that people are born.

'decided'用法不当，'patience'更适合用被动语态'determined'表示被决定。

× I would feel exhausted if you were to told me that I had to do something for a very long time.

✓ I would feel exhausted if you were to tell me that I had to do something for a very long time.

'were to told'中'told'应为动词原形'tell'，因为情态结构后接动词原形。