Patience— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时应避免重复表达“patient”和“impatient”，并且可以用更自然的表达方式来描述不同情境下的耐心程度。

例: It depends on the situation. When I'm engaged in something interesting that takes time, I tend to be quite patient. But if the task is simple and drags on, I usually get a bit restless.

提案: 回答中可以使用更多连接词使句子更流畅，同时避免口头语“Umm”，并且可以提供更具体的例子。

例: I feel impatient when simple tasks take too long because it feels like a waste of time. For instance, waiting for a slow computer to load or when someone arrives late without informing me.

提案: 注意语法错误，如“a interesting”应为“an interesting”，并且避免重复词汇“find find”。句子结构应更自然流畅。

例: If the task is interesting, I usually enjoy it and don't mind spending a lot of time on it. However, for simple tasks that take too long, I tend to get impatient.

提案: 避免使用口头语“Uh”，并且句子结构应更简洁自然。可以更具体地说明为什么设计师需要耐心。

例: I don't have a job at the moment, but I hope to become a designer in the future. This job requires patience because I need to listen carefully to my clients and understand their needs.

提案: 回答较好，但可以使用更多连接词使表达更连贯，同时丰富词汇。

例: Definitely, I am more patient now than when I was a child because I have learned to manage my emotions better. For example, when I encounter difficult situations, I try to stay calm and think carefully before responding.

× If it is a interesting task, I may find find it very funny and I'm willing to deal with it.

✓ If it is an interesting task, I may find it very funny and I'm willing to deal with it.

“a interesting”中，'interesting'以元音音素开头，应该用不定冠词'an'而不是'a'。此外，句中重复了“find”，应删除多余的一个。

× But if it is a simple task and require a lot of times, I may feel impatient.

✓ But if it is a simple task and requires a lot of time, I may feel impatient.

主语是单数“task”，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式“requires”。“a lot of times”应改为“a lot of time”，因为这里指的是时间的量，不是次数。

× Uh, although I don't have a job now, but in the future I may become a designer.

✓ Uh, although I don't have a job now, in the future I may become a designer.

“although”和“but”不能同时使用，二者都是转折连词，使用其中一个即可。

× So I need to be patient, uh, to talk with my customers to know their needs.

✓ So I need to be patient, uh, to talk to my customers to know their needs.

动词“talk”后应接介词“to”表示与某人交谈，而不是“with”。