Patience— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“something don't gets blended”应为“something doesn't go as planned”，以及“practicing big big”表达不准确。建议使用更自然的表达，并注意语法正确。

例: No, I'm not a very patient person. I usually get frustrated when things don't go as planned, and I tend to rush through tasks. However, I'm trying hard to become more patient.

提案: 回答中逻辑连接词使用不当，表达不够清晰，且有语法错误。建议简化句子结构，使用恰当的连接词，使表达更连贯自然。

例: Many things make me feel impatient. For example, when things don't go as well as I expected, I get frustrated. Also, if others around me are impatient, it makes me feel the same.

提案: 回答中存在重复词汇和语法错误，如“for for example”，“the one semi is fits to my interest”。建议简化表达，注意语法和词汇的准确使用。

例: It depends on the situation. For example, if the task interests me, I feel happy and willing to spend a long time on it. However, if I dislike the task, I become frustrated and impatient.

提案: 回答表达不清晰，语法错误较多，如“the patient is the key thing”。建议明确表达观点，使用正确的语法和词汇。

例: Actually, I am a student, and my studies require a lot of patience because I need to explore various kinds of knowledge deeply.

提案: 回答中语法错误和表达不自然，如“my patience is also decline”。建议使用正确的时态和表达方式，使回答更流畅。

例: Actually, no. I think I was more patient as a child. Maybe because I faced many difficulties as I grew up, my patience has declined, but I am trying to become more patient.

× I usually get frustrated when something don't gets blended and I usually rush through tasks.

✓ I usually get frustrated when something doesn't get blended and I usually rush through tasks.

这里的主语是单数something，谓语动词应该用第三人称单数形式doesn't get，而不是don't gets。

× But I'm practicing big big to become patient.

✓ But I'm practicing hard to become patient.

这里的表达不符合英语习惯，应该用副词hard来修饰practicing，表示努力练习。

× when something didn't go well or better, I expected before, I will get impatient.

✓ when something didn't go as well or better as I expected before, I get impatient.

句子中时态不一致，前半句用过去时，后半句用一般现在时更符合习惯，因为表达的是一般情况。

× if someone is impatient too, I will.

✓ if someone is impatient too, I will be impatient as well.

句子不完整，缺少谓语部分，应该补充完整表达。

× I think it depends on situation.

✓ I think it depends on the situation.

depend后面需要加定冠词the，表示特定的情况。

× if the one semi is fits to my interest, I will feel happy and willing to do this thing for a long time.

✓ if the one thing fits my interest, I will feel happy and willing to do this thing for a long time.

原句中one semi不合适，应该是one thing；fits后不需要to，fit用法是fit something。

× if this thing which is my dislike, I will get frustrated and impatient.

✓ if this thing is something I dislike, I will get frustrated and impatient.

dislike是动词，不能直接用作形容词修饰thing，应该用关系代词引导从句。

× Actually, I am a student gradually and the study I faced now rarely requires me to be patient because it needs me to dig deep into all kinds of knowledge and the patient is the key thing.

✓ Actually, I am gradually becoming a student and the study I face now rarely requires me to be patient because it needs me to dig deep into all kinds of knowledge and patience is the key thing.

句子中用词和时态错误，gradually应修饰becoming，face用一般现在时，patient应为名词patience。

× Actually, no. I think when I was a child, I feel I'm more patient.

✓ Actually, no. I think when I was a child, I felt I was more patient.

描述过去的感受，应该用过去时felt和was。

× Maybe. I think maybe facing many difficulties as I grow, so my patience is also decline, but I try to become a more patient.

✓ Maybe. I think facing many difficulties as I grow, my patience has also declined, but I try to become more patient.

时态错误，decline应为过去分词declined，more patient后不加冠词a。