Patience— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and contains grammatical errors. Try to make your response more concise and clear by directly stating your point and supporting it with a reason. Avoid repeating the same idea multiple times.

例: I'm not a very patient person because I like to stick to my schedule and complete tasks quickly. This makes me feel rushed when things don't go as planned.

提案: Your answer is unclear and contains several grammatical mistakes. Focus on expressing your ideas clearly and logically. Use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid confusing phrases.

例: My plans make me feel impatient because I try to finish tasks quickly. If I have a schedule, I follow it strictly, which sometimes makes me feel rushed.

提案: Avoid asking questions back to the examiner. Instead, answer directly and clearly. Also, pay attention to grammar and sentence structure to improve clarity.

例: I usually feel bored and frustrated when I have to do something for a long time. For example, if I need to focus on a task for several hours, I start to lose concentration and feel tired.

提案: Your answer is unclear and contains many grammatical errors. Make sure to answer the question directly and use complete sentences. Explain your point with specific details to make your answer more effective.

例: As a student, my studies require a lot of patience because I have to read many textbooks one by one, which can be time-consuming.

提案: Your answer is generally clear but contains some grammatical errors. Try to use correct verb tenses and sentence structures. Also, use linking words to make your answer more coherent.

例: I think I am more patient now than when I was a child because I have learned to understand situations better. My experiences have helped me become more patient over time.

× I always plan my schedule so I will stick to my plan and complete task quickly.

✓ I always plan my schedule so I stick to my plan and complete tasks quickly.

The use of 'will' is incorrect here because the sentence describes a habitual action, which requires the present simple tense. Also, 'task' should be plural 'tasks' to match the context of multiple tasks.

× So I have a schedule. I will follow my schedule to finish my task so I don't a patient person.

✓ So I have a schedule. I follow my schedule to finish my tasks, so I am not a patient person.

The phrase 'I don't a patient person' is grammatically incorrect; it should be 'I am not a patient person'. Also, 'task' should be plural 'tasks' to indicate multiple tasks.

× I think it's my plan to make me feel impatient because I always stay on the plane and make and finish my task quickly.

✓ I think it's my plan that makes me feel impatient because I always stick to the plan and make and finish my tasks quickly.

The verb 'make' should be in the third person singular form 'makes' to agree with the singular subject 'plan'. Also, 'stay on the plane' is likely a typo for 'stick to the plan'. 'Task' should be plural 'tasks'.

× So if I have a schedule, I will follow the schedule so I know the patient person which makes me more productive.

✓ So if I have a schedule, I follow the schedule, so I know being a patient person makes me more productive.

The phrase 'I know the patient person' is unclear and likely incorrect. It should be rephrased to 'I know being a patient person'. Also, 'will follow' is changed to 'follow' to indicate habitual action.

× Have you ever feel quite bored and frustrated when I have to do something for a long time?

✓ Have you ever felt quite bored and frustrated when you have to do something for a long time?

The verb 'feel' should be in the past participle form 'felt' after 'Have you ever'. Also, the pronoun 'I' should be 'you' to match the question form.

× Have you ever feel quite bored and frustrated when I have to do something for a long time?

✓ Have you ever felt quite bored and frustrated when you have to do something for a long time?

The pronouns should be consistent in the question; 'you' is appropriate instead of 'I' to address the listener.

× For example, if I have a task and I need to focus on this set for several hours, I start to lose the concentrations and feel tired.

✓ For example, if I have a task and I need to focus on it for several hours, I start to lose concentration and feel tired.

'Set' is incorrect and should be 'it' referring to the task. 'Concentrations' should be singular 'concentration' as it is an uncountable noun.

× To honestly and students. So I need your patience to my textbook.

✓ To be honest, I need patience to study my textbook.

The original sentence is unclear and contains incorrect pronouns and words. 'To honestly and students' is incorrect; it should be 'To be honest'. 'Your patience to my textbook' is incorrect; it should be 'patience to study my textbook'.

× Yeah, I need to read the book with so many book 1 by 1.

✓ Yeah, I need to read many books one by one.

'So many book' is incorrect; it should be 'many books' to indicate plural. '1 by 1' is better expressed as 'one by one'.

× So I need more patience in my study life.

✓ So I need more patience in my study life.

This sentence is grammatically correct; no correction needed.

× I think I was more patient now than I was when I was a child because I have to learn, understand the situation better.

✓ I think I am more patient now than I was when I was a child because I have learned to understand situations better.

The present tense 'am' is appropriate for 'now'. 'Have to learn' should be changed to present perfect 'have learned' to indicate completed learning. 'Situation' should be plural 'situations'.

× I realize I have to be more patient and my experience has helped me become more patient over time.

✓ I realise I have to be more patient, and my experience has helped me become more patient over time.

The sentence is mostly correct; 'realize' is spelled 'realise' in British English. A comma before 'and' improves clarity.