Patience— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự tự nhiên và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, làm cho ý nghĩa không rõ ràng. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với một câu chủ đề rõ ràng, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp hơn.

例: No, I am not a patient person. I often get frustrated quickly, especially when things don't go as planned, which makes me feel quite upset.

提案: Câu trả lời thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý nghĩa khó hiểu. Bạn nên sử dụng câu chủ đề rõ ràng và cung cấp ví dụ cụ thể, sử dụng liên từ để kết nối ý.

例: I feel impatient when my work is not going well or when I am hungry. For example, I get angry quickly if I don't have food on time.

提案: Bạn nên sử dụng cấu trúc câu chính xác hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp và thêm chi tiết cụ thể với liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

例: I definitely feel frustrated and stressed when I have to do something for a long time. Therefore, I try to improve my patience and relax my mind by taking breaks.

提案: Câu trả lời chưa hoàn chỉnh và có lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời đầy đủ, rõ ràng và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp để diễn đạt ý tưởng.

例: As a student, my studies require me to be patient, especially when I study math because it can be challenging and requires concentration.

提案: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và không rõ ràng. Bạn nên sử dụng thì đúng, câu hoàn chỉnh và tránh những phần không liên quan để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

例: Yes, I am more patient now than when I was a child. I used to get angry easily, but now I try to stay calm in difficult situations.

× I'm very, very answers and sometimes I I angry with the other people, so I feel very. Unworthy.

✓ I'm very, very anxious and sometimes I get angry with other people, so I feel very unworthy.

The word 'answers' is incorrect here; the intended adjective is likely 'anxious'. Also, 'I I angry' is incorrect; it should be 'I get angry' to form a proper verb phrase. 'Unworthy' should not be capitalized and should be connected to the previous sentence properly.

× When I feel impatient it's a work or a or anything is don't go a friend.

✓ When I feel impatient, it's because work or anything else doesn't go well, for example, I might get angry quickly if I don't have food.

The original sentence is fragmented and uses incorrect conjunctions and structure. 'Or a or anything is don't go a friend' is unclear and grammatically incorrect. The correction clarifies the meaning and uses proper conjunctions and sentence structure.

× I feel stressful.

✓ I feel stressed.

'Stressful' is an adjective describing something that causes stress, while 'stressed' describes a person's feeling. Therefore, 'I feel stressed' is correct.

× I'm try to improve my patient skill and. Relax my brain.

✓ I'm trying to improve my patience skills and relax my brain.

'I'm try' is incorrect; it should be 'I'm trying' to use the present continuous tense. 'Patient skill' should be 'patience skills' to correctly express the noun form and plural. Also, the sentence should be connected properly.

× so it's a very conflict and understandable so I try to.

✓ so it's very confusing and hard to understand, so I try to.

'Conflict' is a noun; the adjective 'conflicting' or 'confusing' is appropriate here. 'Understandable' means easy to understand, which contradicts the intended meaning. The sentence is incomplete and needs proper completion.

× Yes, I have more patience now than I were a child.

✓ Yes, I have more patience now than I did as a child.

'I were a child' is incorrect; the correct past tense is 'I did as a child'. Also, 'more patience' is correct as 'patience' is uncountable.

× I easily get angry with anything going on going a friend so I I don't have a candy.

✓ I used to get angry easily about anything going on around me, so I didn't have much patience.

The original sentence is unclear and contains repeated words and incorrect pronouns. 'Going on going a friend' is nonsensical. 'I don't have a candy' is incorrect; likely intended is 'I didn't have patience' or similar.