Patience— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中使用了不恰当的词汇“passion”，应使用“patience”来表达耐心。此外，回答可以更自然简洁，避免用词错误。

例: I think I'm a patient person most of the time, but waiting in long lines can really test my patience.

提案: 时态使用不准确，应使用一般现在时描述习惯性行为；句子结构不完整，缺少连贯的连接词。

例: Traffic makes me feel impatient because I get angry when I'm stuck and cannot move forward.

提案: 回答较好，但可以使用连接词使句子更连贯，同时丰富细节使表达更具体。

例: I feel a bit tired because I start to lose focus, so I wish the task would finish sooner.

提案: 回答结构清晰，表达自然。可以增加一些细节来丰富内容。

例: Yes, it does. I work with customers, so I often need to answer the same questions calmly and patiently to provide good service.

提案: 回答中词汇使用错误，“passion”应为“patience”，句子结构不完整且表达不清晰。建议重构句子并使用正确词汇。

例: Yes, I am more patient now than when I was a child because working in a bank requires me to patiently answer customers' questions repeatedly.

× Traffic just made me feel impatient.

✓ Traffic just makes me feel impatient.

这里描述的是一般情况下交通让人感到不耐烦的情况，应该用一般现在时。过去时“made”不符合语境。

× I get angry when I'm stuck and can move forward.

✓ I get angry when I'm stuck and can't move forward.

句中缺少否定词“can't”，导致句意不完整，正确表达应为“我被堵住，不能前进时生气”。

× I feel a bit tired, I start to lose focus and wish the task would finish sooner.

✓ I feel a bit tired, I start to lose focus and wish the task would be finished sooner.

wish后面表达希望某事发生，需用被动语态“be finished”，而不是主动语态“finish”。

× Yes it does. I work with customers and sometimes I need to answer the same questions over and over again calmly.

✓ Yes, it does. I work with customers and sometimes I need to answer the same question over and over again calmly.

questions复数与后文语境不符，前文提到“the same question”，应保持单数一致。

× Yes, because I work in the bank and I need to answer the same question for my customers so I have to passion nowadays.

✓ Yes, because I work in a bank and I need to answer the same question for my customers, so I have to be patient nowadays.

“have to passion”错误，正确表达应为“have to be patient”，即“必须有耐心”。另外，“in the bank”改为“in a bank”更自然。