Patience— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和拼写错误，且表达不够自然。建议注意冠词的使用（如"a patient person"），并避免拼写错误（"patient"而非"patient"）。此外，回答应更简洁，避免不必要的重复。

例: Yes, I am generally a patient person because I can stay calm when facing problems. However, my patience sometimes varies depending on my mood.

提案: 回答语句不完整且断断续续，缺乏连贯性。建议使用完整句子，并用连接词使表达更流畅。同时，注意词汇的准确使用，如"especially"而非"specially"。

例: A bad Internet connection makes me feel very impatient because it disrupts my work and online communication, especially when I am doing important tasks.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清的问题。建议使用完整句子，避免使用疑问句式表达陈述内容，并且注意大小写和标点符号的正确使用。

例: When I have to do something for a long time, I usually feel bored and sometimes daydream. To relieve this, I take breaks or listen to music.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，句子不完整且表达混乱。建议练习句子结构，使用连贯的句子表达观点，并注意词汇拼写和搭配，如"especially"和"patience"。

例: I am not working now, but I believe every job requires patience, especially those that involve a lot of communication with others. Patience is important not only at work but also in daily life.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和拼写错误，句子不完整。建议使用正确的时态和句子结构，避免拼写错误（如"patience"），并使表达更连贯。

例: Yes, I am more patient now than when I was a child. My patience has grown as I have gotten older, and I realize that being patient is important in daily life.

× Mostly I'm patient person, I can easily stay calm when facing problems.

✓ Mostly I'm a patient person, I can easily stay calm when facing problems.

这里缺少冠词“a”，因为“patient person”是单数可数名词，前面需要加不定冠词“a”。

× An US, I think my patient changes with my mood.

✓ As an example, I think my patience changes with my mood.

“patient”是形容词或名词，原句中应使用名词“patience”表示耐心；“An US”表达不清，应改为“As an example”。

× I think a bad Internet connection makes me feel very impatient because it. This robs my work. And online communication. Is specially when I'm doing some important jobs.

✓ I think a bad Internet connection makes me feel very impatient because it disrupts my work and online communication, especially when I'm doing some important jobs.

原句断句不当，导致语义不连贯，应合并为完整句子，且“robs my work”用词不当，应改为“disrupts my work”。

× Is specially when I'm doing some important jobs.

✓ It is especially when I'm doing some important jobs.

句子缺少主语，应补充“It is”；“specially”应改为“especially”，表示“尤其”。

× Even have a Daydream? To unload that I will. Take a break or listen to music.

✓ Sometimes I even have daydreams. To relieve that, I will take a break or listen to music.

原句断句错误，且“unload”用词不当，应改为“relieve”；“Daydream”应小写且复数形式“daydreams”。

× I'm not working now, but I think every jobs need.

✓ I'm not working now, but I think every job needs.

“every”后应接单数名词，“jobs”应改为单数“job”；动词“need”应与单数主语“every job”保持一致，改为“needs”。

× People to be patient is specially the jobs.

✓ People need to be patient, especially in jobs.

原句结构不完整，应补充谓语动词“need”，并调整表达使句子通顺。

× Which required lots of communication with others.

✓ Which require lots of communication with others.

“Which”指代复数“jobs”，动词应使用复数形式“require”。

× An icing patient is important.

✓ Being patient is important.

“An icing patient”拼写错误，应为“Being patient”，表示“有耐心是重要的”。

× Not to bring jobs, but also in daily lives.

✓ Not only for jobs, but also in daily life.

“Not to bring jobs”表达不清，应改为“Not only for jobs”；“daily lives”应为不可数名词“daily life”。

× Yes, I'm more patient now then when I'm was a kid.

✓ Yes, I'm more patient now than when I was a kid.

“then”应为比较连词“than”；“I'm was”时态错误，应为“I was”。

× I my patients grew.

✓ My patience has grown.

“patients”应为“patience”，且时态应使用现在完成时“has grown”。

× As I'm growing older.

✓ As I'm growing older,

该句为状语从句，需与主句连用，不能单独成句。

× An icing patient is important.

✓ Being patient is important.

同上，拼写错误，应为“Being patient”。

× I need to learn be more patient in my daily life.

✓ I need to learn to be more patient in my daily life.

动词“learn”后应接不定式“to be”，缺少“to”。