Patience— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答中存在语法错误和用词不当，影响了表达的自然性和准确性。建议注意主谓一致，使用正确的介词和连词，并避免重复表达。可以尝试用更简洁的句子表达观点。

例: I think it depends on the situation. When I really enjoy something, I can be very patient because I am interested in it. However, if I dislike something, I tend to feel impatient.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不清晰，且缺乏连贯性。建议理清思路，使用正确的时态和词汇，避免重复，并用连接词使句子更连贯。

例: Doing housework, especially washing many dishes, makes me feel impatient. For example, once I had to wash about 200 dishes, which made me feel very frustrated.

提案: 回答中存在语法和表达错误，句子结构不完整。建议使用完整句子，注意时态和主谓一致，并用连接词使表达更流畅。

例: I think it depends on the situation. If I enjoy the activity, like writing books or watching movies, I feel very patient. But if I dislike it, I become impatient.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够自然。建议使用正确的词汇（如'patience'而非'patient'），并使句子更连贯。可以适当扩展说明。

例: No, my current job does not require much patience. However, I need to be patient when preparing for the LSAT because it is very difficult. For example, I have to memorize many difficult words.

提案: 回答内容混乱且语法错误严重，表达不完整。建议理清思路，使用完整句子，避免无关内容，明确回答问题。

例: Yes, I am more patient now than when I was a child. As a child, I was very impatient, even though I loved writing stories. Now, I have learned to be more patient in many situations.

× I think is depends on the saturation.

✓ I think it depends on the situation.

句子中缺少主语“it”，且“saturation”应为“situation”，表示“情况”。缺少主语导致句子结构不完整。

× We I really enjoy something I can be very patient becauses I'm interested it.

✓ When I really enjoy something, I can be very patient because I'm interested in it.

“We I”应为“When I”，且“becauses”拼写错误，应为“because”。“interested it”缺少介词“in”，正确表达为“interested in it”。

× However if it's something I dislike I will feel not patient.

✓ However, if it's something I dislike, I will feel impatient.

缺少逗号分隔条件状语从句，且“feel not patient”表达不自然，应使用形容词“impatient”。

× I think maybe we I watched the housework.

✓ I think maybe when I do the housework.

“we I watched”语法错误，应为“when I do”，且“watched the housework”表达不当，做家务用“do the housework”。

× We're helping my mother with the house, house work.

✓ I'm helping my mother with the housework.

“We're”指“we are”，与后文不符，应为“I am”。“house work”应合并为“housework”。

× I remember once a time I watched about. 200 dishes.

✓ I remember one time I washed about 200 dishes.

“watched”用错，洗碗应使用“washed”。“once a time”应为“one time”。

× It made me feel very go crazy.

✓ It made me feel very crazy.

“go crazy”是动词短语，不能直接用作形容词，应去掉“go”用“crazy”形容感受。

× I think is depends on the situation if it's something I enjoy it such as write books all watch the movies.

✓ I think it depends on the situation. If it's something I enjoy, such as writing books or watching movies,

缺少主语“it”，且“enjoy it”中“it”多余。动词“write”和“watch”应改为动名词形式“writing”和“watching”。

× I will feel. Patient very much if is something I dislike.

✓ I will feel very impatient if it is something I dislike.

“feel. Patient”断句错误，应连写为“feel very impatient”。缺少主语“it”。

× No, I don't have. I don't have patient at the moment, so I don't need to be patient for work.

✓ No, I don't have patience at the moment, so I don't need to be patient for work.

“have patient”错误，应为“have patience”，因为“patience”是不可数名词。

× However, I need to pass the LSAT.

✓ However, I need to pass the LSAT.

此句无语法错误，保持原句。

× Damn, it's very difficult for me.

✓ Damn, it's very difficult for me.

此句无语法错误，保持原句。

× For example, I need to remember many hard words.

✓ For example, I need to remember many difficult words.

“hard words”表达不自然，形容词“difficult”更适合描述“words”。

× Yes, we I was a child.

✓ Yes, when I was a child,

“we I”错误，应为“when I”。

× I was a very. Patient person is bascically a big fan of write books.

✓ I was a very patient person. I was basically a big fan of writing books.

“Patient”不应大写且句子断句错误。动词“write”应改为动名词“writing”。

× We I was a child.

✓ When I was a child,

“We I”错误，应为“when I”。

× I really like write books, especially interesting stories.

✓ I really like writing books, especially interesting stories.

“like”后应接动名词“writing”，而非动词原形“write”。

× 8 car made me feel.

✓ It made me feel happy.

句子不完整，“8 car”无意义，应补充完整表达。