Patience— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答较为自然且有效，但可以增加一些连接词使表达更连贯，同时丰富细节，使回答更具体。

例: Yes, I consider myself a patient person because, for instance, when I face challenging situations at work, I try to stay calm and think things through carefully rather than reacting impulsively. This approach helps me solve problems more effectively.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误（queries应为queues），且表达略显简单。建议使用更准确的词汇，并用连接词丰富句子结构。

例: There are several things that make me feel impatient; however, one of the main triggers is waiting in long queues, especially when I have a tight schedule.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，如“for long time”应为“for a long time”，“concentration trends to job”表达不明确。建议注意语法和表达的准确性，并使用连接词使句子更流畅。

例: I usually feel quite tired and sometimes a bit bored when I have to do something for a long time. For example, if I have to study or work continuously without breaks, my concentration tends to decrease.

提案: 回答中有语法错误，如“students would struggle”应为“students who struggle”，建议注意句子结构和连接词的使用，使表达更自然。

例: Yes, my job definitely requires a great deal of patience. For example, when dealing with students who struggle to grasp certain concepts, I need to remain calm and supportive to help them improve.

提案: 回答较好，但最后一句“And found it difficult to wait”缺少主语，建议合并句子并使用连接词使表达更流畅。

例: Yes, I believe I am more patient now compared to when I was a child because, as a child, I often wanted immediate results and found it difficult to wait.

× There are several things that make me feel impatient. But one of the main triggers is waiting in long queries, especially when I have a tight schedule.

✓ There are several things that make me feel impatient. But one of the main triggers is waiting in long queues, especially when I have a tight schedule.

这里的“queries”应为“queues”，因为表示排队等待时应使用“queue”，而“queries”是“查询”的意思，属于词汇错误，属于单复数问题。

× I usually feel quite tired and sometimes a bit bored when I have to do something for long time.

✓ I usually feel quite tired and sometimes a bit bored when I have to do something for a long time.

“for long time”缺少冠词“a”，应为“for a long time”，表示一段较长的时间，属于单复数问题。

× For example if I have to study or work continuously without breaks my concentration trends to job.

✓ For example, if I have to study or work continuously without breaks, my concentration tends to drop.

原句结构混乱，缺少逗号且“trends to job”表达不正确，应为“tends to drop”表示注意力下降，属于句子结构错误。

× For example, when dealing with students would struggle to grasp certain concepts, I need to remain calm and supportive to help them improve.

✓ For example, when dealing with students who struggle to grasp certain concepts, I need to remain calm and supportive to help them improve.

缺少关系代词“who”，导致句子结构不完整，属于句子结构错误。

× As a child, I often wanted immediate results. And found it difficult to wait.

✓ As a child, I often wanted immediate results and found it difficult to wait.

两个句子之间不应断开，第二句缺少主语，属于句子结构错误，应合并为一个完整句子。