Patience— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误，如“of”多余，动词单复数不一致。建议简洁明了地表达观点，避免语法错误，并用连词连接句子。

例: No, I am not a patient person. For example, if my friends fail to understand me several times, I become impatient and may speak louder.

提案: 回答中语法错误明显，如动词形式错误和时态错误。建议使用正确的动词形式，并用连词丰富句子。

例: I feel impatient when my friends keep complaining to me for a long time because it drains my energy.

提案: 回答中语法和表达不清晰，句子结构混乱。建议用完整句子表达观点，避免疑问句混用，增加连贯性。

例: I feel a bit anxious when I have to do something for a long time because I am not sure if I can handle the tasks well.

提案: 回答中词汇使用错误，如“jewelry in low”应为“lawyer”。句子结构不完整，缺少连词。建议准确使用词汇并用连词连接句子。

例: Yes, I am a lawyer, so I often need to explain the meanings of legal provisions to others and answer their questions. This job requires a lot of patience.

提案: 回答中存在词汇错误，如“claim myself down”应为“calm myself down”。建议使用正确表达并用连词使句子更流畅。

例: Of course, when I was a child, I often had arguments with my classmates over small matters, but now if the same situation occurs, I first calm myself down.

× No, I'm not a patient person of.

✓ No, I'm not a patient person.

句中“of”使用错误，‘a patient person’后不需要介词‘of’，应直接表达。

× if my friends fails to understand me several times, I will become impatient and speak louder.

✓ if my friends fail to understand me several times, I will become impatient and speak louder.

主语是复数‘friends’，谓语动词应使用复数形式‘fail’，而不是单数‘fails’。

× If my friends keeps complaining to me for a long time, I will feeling impatient.

✓ If my friends keep complaining to me for a long time, I will feel impatient.

‘friends’为复数，谓语动词应为复数形式‘keep’；‘will feeling’错误，应为‘will feel’。

× Maybe I will feel a bit anxious because I'm not sure can I handle this tasks? Will long task is trained to make me lazy?

✓ Maybe I will feel a bit anxious because I'm not sure if I can handle these tasks. Will long tasks make me lazy?

‘can I handle this tasks’语序错误且‘tasks’应为复数，需用‘these tasks’；‘Will long task is trained to make me lazy?’结构混乱，应改为‘Will long tasks make me lazy?’。

× I'm a jewelry in low so I often need to explain the meanings of legal provisions to others and also need answer their questions.

✓ I'm a lawyer, so I often need to explain the meanings of legal provisions to others and also need to answer their questions.

‘jewelry in low’错误，应为‘lawyer’；‘need answer’缺少不定式‘to’，应为‘need to answer’。

× This is a job requires patience.

✓ This is a job that requires patience.

‘job requires’缺少关系代词‘that’，使句子完整。

× Of course, when I was a child I often had arguments with my classmates because of small matters, but now if the same situation occurs, I will first claim myself down.

✓ Of course, when I was a child I often had arguments with my classmates because of small matters, but now if the same situation occurs, I will first calm myself down.

‘claim myself down’拼写错误，应为‘calm myself down’，表示‘使自己冷静下来’。