Patience— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: คำตอบของคุณควรชัดเจนและเป็นธรรมชาติมากขึ้น พยายามตอบตรงคำถามโดยเริ่มด้วยประโยคหลักที่ชัดเจน และหลีกเลี่ยงการใช้คำที่ไม่ถูกต้องหรือสับสน เช่น 'Is depend on what?' ควรใช้ 'It depends on the situation.' และให้รายละเอียดสนับสนุนที่ชัดเจนและเชื่อมโยงกันด้วยคำเชื่อม เช่น 'because' หรือ 'for example'

例: It depends on the situation. In general, I am not very patient, especially when I have to wait in a long queue to eat. For example, I find it frustrating to wait for a long time just to have a meal at a popular restaurant.

提案: ควรใช้โครงสร้างประโยคที่ถูกต้องและคำศัพท์ที่เหมาะสม เช่น 'waiting in a long queue to eat' และใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่อเชื่อมโยงความคิด เช่น 'because' หรือ 'so' นอกจากนี้ควรให้รายละเอียดที่ชัดเจนและเป็นธรรมชาติมากขึ้น

例: I feel impatient when I have to wait in a long queue to eat because I think there are many other restaurants I could try instead of waiting for a long time just to eat at one place.

提案: คำตอบนี้ไม่ชัดเจนและมีข้อผิดพลาดทางไวยากรณ์ ควรตอบโดยใช้ประโยคที่สมบูรณ์และชัดเจน เช่น 'If the activity is important for my life, I try to be patient.' และให้รายละเอียดเพิ่มเติมเพื่ออธิบายความรู้สึกของคุณ

例: If the activity is important for my life or future, I try to be patient even if it takes a long time. However, sometimes it can be tiring and I feel a bit frustrated.

提案: ควรใช้ประโยคที่สมบูรณ์และคำศัพท์ที่ถูกต้อง เช่น 'My job requires me to communicate with clients.' และใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่อเชื่อมโยงความคิด นอกจากนี้ควรหลีกเลี่ยงคำที่ไม่เหมาะสม เช่น 'cry clients' และใช้คำที่ถูกต้อง เช่น 'angry clients'

例: Yes, my job requires me to communicate with clients. Sometimes, clients can be angry and contact us with difficult issues, so I have to be patient and answer their questions politely.

提案: คำตอบนี้มีข้อผิดพลาดทางไวยากรณ์และคำศัพท์มาก ควรใช้ประโยคที่ชัดเจนและถูกต้อง เช่น 'I think I am more patient now than when I was a child.' และให้รายละเอียดสนับสนุนที่เหมาะสม เช่น อธิบายพฤติกรรมในอดีตและการเปลี่ยนแปลงในปัจจุบัน

例: I think I am more patient now than when I was a child. When I was young, I used to cry a lot if my mom didn't buy me toys, but now I can control my emotions better and wait calmly.

× Is depend on what?

✓ It depends on what?

The original sentence lacks a subject, causing a sentence structure error. Adding 'It' as the subject corrects the sentence structure.

× I need to be patient about if you.

✓ I need to be patient with you.

The preposition 'about' is incorrectly used here. The correct preposition to express patience towards someone is 'with'.

× In general, I'm not really patient.

✓ In general, I'm not really patient.

This sentence is grammatically correct; no correction needed.

× I couldn't wait for a long queue to eat.

✓ I can't wait in a long queue to eat.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'couldn't' and the phrase 'wait for a long queue'. The correct expression is 'wait in a long queue' and present tense 'can't' to match context.

× One meal at particularly strong.

✓ One meal is particularly strong.

The sentence lacks a verb 'is' to link subject and complement, causing a sentence structure error.

× So I don't think I'm a patient person.

✓ So I don't think I'm a patient person.

This sentence is grammatically correct; no correction needed.

× As I said earlier, waiting for a long queue to each to eat one meals, I feel like there's a lot more restaurant we can try.

✓ As I said earlier, waiting in a long queue to eat one meal, I feel like there are a lot more restaurants we can try.

Incorrect preposition 'for' should be 'in' for 'waiting in a queue'. 'Each' is incorrect, should be 'eat'. 'One meals' is incorrect; 'one meal' is singular. 'There's' should be 'there are' to agree with plural 'restaurants'.

× Rather than waiting for a long time doing nothing just to eat this particular restaurant.

✓ Rather than waiting for a long time doing nothing just to eat at this particular restaurant.

The preposition 'at' is needed before 'this particular restaurant' to indicate location.

× If that activity is necessary for my life or my next near future, I can't orally the.

✓ If that activity is necessary for my life or my near future, I can't avoid it.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. 'Can't orally the' is incorrect and likely a mishearing or typo. The corrected sentence completes the thought logically.

× Uh. The patient or the time consuming is get.

✓ Uh. I try to be patient even if it is time-consuming.

The original sentence is unclear and grammatically incorrect. The correction clarifies the intended meaning using correct adjectives and structure.

× Yes, my job is. Need to be communicate with clients, sometimes cry clients can have bad temper and contact us to consult some difficult issue and we have to be patient and politely answered the question.

✓ Yes, my job requires me to communicate with clients. Sometimes, clients can have a bad temper and contact us to consult on difficult issues, and we have to be patient and politely answer their questions.

The original sentence has multiple sentence fragments and incorrect verb forms. The correction provides proper sentence structure, verb agreement, and clarity.

× This acts as.

✓ This is part of the job.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. The correction completes the thought logically.

× I think I'm getting better everyday in my patient NIS.

✓ I think I'm getting better every day in my patience.

'Everyday' (one word) is an adjective meaning common; 'every day' (two words) means each day. 'Patient NIS' is incorrect; the correct noun is 'patience'.

× When I was a shy I used to cry so hot when my mom didn't buy me a toys.

✓ When I was a child, I used to cry a lot when my mom didn't buy me toys.

'A shy' is incorrect; 'a child' is correct. 'Cry so hot' is incorrect; 'cry a lot' is appropriate. 'A toys' is incorrect; 'toys' is plural and does not need 'a'.

× An I could not. Toro Toro lead at the neat that I want is not accomplish.

✓ And I could not tolerate not getting what I wanted.

The original sentence is unclear and contains many errors. The correction provides a clear, grammatically correct sentence conveying the intended meaning.