Patience— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时语言不够自然，表达不够清晰，且有语法错误。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，使用更准确的词汇表达耐心的不同情境。

例: I think it depends on the situation. When I play with my friends, I am patient and willing to wait. However, when it comes to studying, I prefer to finish tasks quickly without delay.

提案: 回答内容不连贯，语法和表达混乱。建议使用完整句子，清晰表达因工作压力和截止日期而感到不耐烦的原因。

例: I feel impatient mainly because of work pressure. If I don't finish tasks before the deadline, I worry about possible consequences, which makes me anxious.

提案: 表达混乱且不连贯，语法错误较多。建议用简洁明了的句子表达对重复和单调任务的厌烦感。

例: I usually get bored and frustrated when I have to do the same thing repeatedly. I prefer tasks that change and keep me interested.

提案: 回答内容不清晰，句子结构混乱，缺乏逻辑。建议明确说明工作内容和是否需要耐心，使用连贯的句子。

例: No, my job does not require much patience. I mainly handle emergencies, such as severe weather warnings, and I need to act quickly to inform the public.

提案: 表达不够清晰，语法和逻辑有问题。建议直接回答问题，并用简单句说明原因。

例: I think I am less patient now than when I was a child. As I grow older, I want to do exciting things quickly and don't like waiting for others.

× Well I would say it depends.

✓ Well, I would say it depends.

句首和句中需要逗号来分隔，增加句子清晰度。

× So if I go to play with my friends I will be patient enough for waiting for him or her.

✓ So if I go to play with my friends, I will be patient enough to wait for him or her.

介词后面应接动词原形或不定式，不能用动名词形式。

× But if it relates to something, study will work.

✓ But if it relates to something, studying will work.

此处应使用动名词作主语，表示“学习”这个动作。

× I'm not rather like.

✓ I don't really like it.

表达否定时应使用助动词do，且“rather like”用法不当，应改为“really like”。

× Things to be done inmediately an that's all.

✓ Things need to be done immediately, and that's all.

“immediately”拼写错误，且句子缺少谓语动词，需补充完整。

× Oh, I would say must be the pressure of work and sometimes is the deadline that if I haven't done this before the deadline, I would say I.

✓ Oh, I would say it must be the pressure of work, and sometimes it's the deadline; if I haven't done this before the deadline, I would say I...

情态动词“must”前应加主语“it”，句子结构不完整，需补充。

× Maybe be punished or something Well. Get.

✓ Maybe I will be punished or something. Well, I get it.

句子缺少主语和谓语，结构混乱，需补充完整。

× Oh you will definitely drop me mad I had things to be done again an again an I hate things that unchanged so if I have to do.

✓ Oh, you will definitely make me mad. I have things to be done again and again, and I hate things that remain unchanged, so if I have to do...

“drop me mad”表达错误，应为“make me mad”；时态和连词使用错误。

× A thing that just lost Sims forever.

✓ A thing that just lasts forever.

“lost Sims”无意义，应为“lasts”，表示持续。

× I will get boring.

✓ I will get bored.

“get boring”表示使别人无聊，应为“get bored”表示自己感到无聊。

× Sometimes I hate it. I will get rid of.

✓ Sometimes I hate it. I will get rid of it.

“get rid of”是及物短语，后面必须有宾语。

× Well, no, my job is. More focus on dealing with things that emergencies for example, if their results on the snow, the hills will kind of tornadoes, I will click.

✓ Well, no, my job is more focused on dealing with emergencies. For example, if there are results on the snow, the hills, or kinds of tornadoes, I will click...

句子结构混乱，时态和词汇使用错误，需调整。

× Released by the warning to the public or inform our customers that will just quick.

✓ I release warnings to the public or inform our customers quickly.

被动语态使用错误，且句子不完整，需改为主动语态并补充完整。

× I will click. Released by the warning to the public or inform our customers that will just quick.

✓ I will send out warnings to the public or inform our customers quickly.

“click”用法不当，应使用“send out”或“issue”表示发布警告。

× I will say maybe no because what came accounts for most of my time.

✓ I would say maybe no because what came takes up most of my time.

时态不一致，“came”应与现在时态搭配，且“accounts for”用法不当。

× I am becoming more and more impatient further to play with my friends then we are pursuing excited things not to waiting for someone.

✓ I am becoming more and more impatient when playing with my friends because we are pursuing exciting things instead of waiting for someone.

“further to play”用法错误，应为“when playing”；“not to waiting”应为“instead of waiting”。