Patience— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự tự nhiên và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý không rõ ràng. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ không cần thiết.

例: Yes, I consider myself a patient person because I always try to stay calm and help others when they face difficulties.

提案: Bạn cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ để câu trả lời rõ ràng hơn. Hãy sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp.

例: I feel impatient when I teach my cousin because they often don't understand me, so I have to be very patient, but sometimes it makes me frustrated.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, tránh lỗi và dùng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

例: At first, I feel tired when doing something for a long time, but if I keep going, I become more patient and work harder until I finish it.

提案: Bạn cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và từ vựng để câu trả lời rõ ràng và tự nhiên hơn. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp và dùng từ phù hợp với ngữ cảnh.

例: Yes, my job as a waiter requires me to be patient because I need to deal with customers politely to earn their respect.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lỗi để truyền đạt ý tốt hơn.

例: Yes, I am more patient now than when I was a child because I used to get angry easily, but now I stay calm when facing problems.

× I am 100% patient person because when in their difficult situation I always be careful man take care of everyone so they call me in the patient.

✓ I am 100% a patient person because when people are in difficult situations, I always am a careful man who takes care of everyone, so they call me patient.

The sentence lacks the article 'a' before 'patient person' and uses 'their' incorrectly without a clear plural noun. Also, 'be careful man' should be 'a careful man' and 'take care' should be 'takes care' to agree with the singular subject. The phrase 'call me in the patient' is incorrect; it should be 'call me patient.' These corrections fix singular/plural and article usage.

× I am 100% patient person because when in their difficult situation I always be careful man take care of everyone so they call me in the patient.

✓ I am 100% a patient person because when people are in difficult situations, I am always a careful man who takes care of everyone, so they call me patient.

The verb 'be' is incorrectly used as 'always be' instead of 'am always' to match the present tense and subject. Also, 'take care' should be 'takes care' to agree with the singular subject 'man.' These are present tense errors.

× I am 100% patient person because when in their difficult situation I always be careful man take care of everyone so they call me in the patient.

✓ I am 100% a patient person because when people are in difficult situations, I always am a careful man who takes care of everyone, so they call me patient.

The phrase 'when in their difficult situation' is missing the preposition 'people are' to clarify the subject and correct prepositional usage. Also, 'call me in the patient' is incorrect; it should be 'call me patient' without 'in.'

× When I teaching my cousin they always don't understand what I said and I have to be more patient for them so that they will considering what I said.

✓ When I teach my cousin, they always don't understand what I say, and I have to be more patient with them so that they will consider what I say.

'When I teaching' should be 'When I teach' to use the correct present tense form. 'They always don't understand' is awkward; better is 'they don't always understand.' 'What I said' should be 'what I say' to maintain present tense consistency. 'Will considering' should be 'will consider.' Also, 'patient for them' should be 'patient with them.'

× When I teaching my cousin they always don't understand what I said and I have to be more patient for them so that they will considering what I said.

✓ When I teach my cousin, they often don't understand what I say, and I have to be more patient with them so that they will consider what I say.

The preposition 'for' is incorrectly used with 'patient'; the correct preposition is 'with.' Also, 'will considering' is incorrect; it should be 'will consider.'

× So there is always makes me feel angry an news myself.

✓ So it always makes me feel angry and annoys myself.

The phrase 'there is always makes' is incorrect; it should be 'it always makes.' Also, 'an news myself' is incorrect; likely intended 'annoys myself.' The conjunction 'and' is misspelled as 'an.'

× So there is always makes me feel angry an news myself.

✓ So it always makes me feel angry and annoys me.

The phrase 'an news myself' is incorrect; 'news' is uncountable and does not fit here. The correct phrase is 'annoys me.' Also, 'myself' is unnecessary here; 'me' is correct.

× When I teaching my cousin they always don't understand what I said and I have to be more patient for them so that they will considering what I said.

✓ When I teach my cousin, they often don't understand what I say, and I have to be more patient with them so that they will consider what I say.

The verb 'teaching' should be 'teach' to match present tense. 'What I said' should be 'what I say' to maintain present tense consistency. 'Will considering' should be 'will consider.'

× Firstly, I will be very tired, but if I get on with it I will be more patient in that so that I will work harder or little by little.

✓ Firstly, I will be very tired, but if I get on with it, I will become more patient so that I can work harder little by little.

The phrase 'more patient in that' is awkward; 'more patient' suffices. 'Work harder or little by little' is unclear; 'work harder little by little' or 'work harder gradually' is better. Adding commas improves clarity.

× So after all I've done autumn that thing.

✓ So after all, I've done that thing.

The word 'autumn' is incorrect here; likely a mishearing or typo. Removing it corrects the sentence. Also, a comma after 'after all' improves readability.

× Of course my job is the waiter in the restaurant so that I will have to be based in with their customers so that they will give me motive an so the respectful to me.

✓ Of course, my job is a waiter in a restaurant, so I have to be patient with customers so that they will be motivated and respectful to me.

'Based in with their customers' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'patient with customers.' 'Give me motive an so the respectful' is incorrect; it should be 'be motivated and respectful.' Articles 'a' and 'a' before 'waiter' and 'restaurant' are needed.

× Of course my job is the waiter in the restaurant so that I will have to be based in with their customers so that they will give me motive an so the respectful to me.

✓ Of course, my job is a waiter in a restaurant, so I have to be patient with customers so that they will be motivated and respectful to me.

The definite articles 'the' before 'waiter' and 'restaurant' are incorrect here; indefinite articles 'a' should be used because the speaker is referring to their job in general, not a specific waiter or restaurant.

× Of course my job is the waiter in the restaurant so that I will have to be based in with their customers so that they will give me motive an so the respectful to me.

✓ Of course, my job is a waiter in a restaurant, so I have to be patient with customers so that they will be motivated and respectful to me.

The phrase 'will have to be based in with' is awkward and incorrect; 'have to be patient with' is the correct present tense expression.

× Of course yes I remember when I will try all I always been angry an this RESP ITE phone to any situation so they always think that I'm impatient and now I'm getting more Cam Indian in solving the situation.

✓ Of course, yes, I remember when I tried everything; I was always angry and disrespectful in any situation, so they always thought that I was impatient, and now I'm becoming calmer in solving situations.

'When I will try all' should be 'when I tried everything' to use past tense. 'I always been angry' should be 'I was always angry.' 'This RESP ITE phone' is likely 'disrespectful.' 'They always think' should be 'they always thought' to maintain past tense. 'I'm getting more Cam Indian' is likely 'I'm becoming calmer.'

× Of course yes I remember when I will try all I always been angry an this RESP ITE phone to any situation so they always think that I'm impatient and now I'm getting more Cam Indian in solving the situation.

✓ Of course, yes, I remember when I tried everything; I was always angry and disrespectful in any situation, so they always thought that I was impatient, and now I'm becoming calmer in solving situations.

The phrase 'this RESP ITE phone' is a misspelling of 'disrespectful,' an adjective describing behavior. 'Getting more Cam Indian' is a misspelling of 'becoming calmer,' an adverbial phrase describing how the speaker is changing.