Patience— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答不够自然且语法错误较多，建议简洁明了地表达观点，并避免语法错误。

例: I don't think I'm a patient person because many things easily make me impatient.

提案: 回答内容不清晰，语法和表达混乱，建议使用连贯的句子并具体说明原因。

例: I feel impatient in situations like waiting in long queues or when things don't go as planned, which makes me annoyed quickly.

提案: 回答中有语法错误且表达不连贯，建议直接回答问题并用具体例子支持观点。

例: I feel quite annoyed when I have to do something for a long time, such as waiting in long queues, because it feels like a waste of time.

提案: 回答不完整且表达不清，建议明确回答问题并简洁说明理由。

例: I don't think my job requires much patience because I work in biomedical engineering, which is more about precision.

提案: 回答基本清楚，但句子结构不完整，建议使用完整句子表达比较。

例: I don't think I am more patient now; in fact, I am more impatient than when I was a child.

× I think I'm not a patient person becauses many things.

✓ I think I'm not a patient person because of many things.

句中 'becauses' 是拼写错误，且缺少介词 'of' 来连接原因，正确表达应为 'because of many things'，表示原因。

× Are easy to make me impatient.

✓ They are easy to make me impatient.

句子缺少主语，应补充主语 'They'，使句子完整。

× Many scenes makes me feel impatient, for example when I have two with a long queues or win.

✓ Many scenes make me feel impatient, for example when I have to wait in long queues or win.

主语 'Many scenes' 是复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式 'make'。另外，句中 'two with a long queues or win' 语义不清，推测为 'have to wait in long queues or when I win'，需调整。

× Since don't go as planned, I tend to get annoyed quickly.

✓ Since things don't go as planned, I tend to get annoyed quickly.

句子缺少主语，应补充 'things'，使句子完整。

× Are you really feel quite annoying when I have to do something for a long time?

✓ I really feel quite annoyed when I have to do something for a long time.

句子结构错误，疑问句改为陈述句，且 'annoying' 应改为 'annoyed'，表示感受。

× For example, why I have to wait in long queues, I quickly get.

✓ For example, when I have to wait in long queues, I quickly get annoyed.

句子结构不完整，缺少谓语 'get annoyed'，且 'why' 应改为 'when'。

× Annoying because it feels like a waste of time.

✓ I feel annoyed because it feels like a waste of time.

句子缺少主语和谓语，应补充 'I feel'，使句子完整。

× I think maybe not because I'm measuring.

✓ I think maybe not because I'm in measurement.

句子结构不完整且表达不清，推测意为 '我认为可能不是，因为我在测量工作中'，需调整表达。

× Biomedical engineering so.

✓ I work in biomedical engineering, so it doesn't matter.

句子不完整，缺少谓语和连接词，需补充完整表达。

× It doesn't matter.

✓ It doesn't require me to be patient.

根据上下文，回答应明确是否需要耐心，原句表达不清。

× I don't think so. I think I'm more impatient than. When I was a child.

✓ I don't think so. I think I'm more impatient than when I was a child.

句子断裂，应将两句合并，去掉多余的句号，使句子通顺。