Patience— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达不够清晰，语法和词汇使用有误，导致意思难以理解。建议简洁明了地回答问题，避免语法错误，并用恰当的词汇表达耐心与不耐烦的区别。

例: Yes, I consider myself a patient person because I can spend hours working on challenging problems without getting frustrated. However, sometimes I do get impatient when others are slow to understand things.

提案: 回答内容混乱且不连贯，缺乏逻辑和具体细节。建议明确指出让你感到不耐烦的具体原因，并使用连接词使句子更流畅。

例: I usually feel impatient when I am stuck in traffic jams because it wastes my time. Also, waiting for appointments or classes that start late makes me feel stressed.

提案: 回答结构较好，但语法错误影响表达。建议注意时态一致性，并用连接词连接句子，使表达更自然。

例: It depends on the situation. If I spend a long time solving a challenging math problem, I feel a sense of achievement. However, if I spend too long doing sports, I often feel tired and unhappy.

提案: 回答中存在语法和词汇错误，表达不清晰。建议简洁明了地说明工作需要耐心的原因，并使用正确的词汇和句子结构。

例: Yes, my job requires a lot of patience because I am a math teacher. I need to help students understand difficult problems, which often takes time and repeated explanations.

提案: 回答表达不够清晰，语法和词汇使用不当。建议明确比较现在和过去的耐心程度，并用连贯的句子表达原因。

例: I am more patient now than when I was a child because I have more responsibilities. When I was young, I could focus only on my studies without worrying about other things.

× Yes, impatient becauses I can spend the whole afternoon in the library just for challenging miss problem and in addition I really be angry with others.

✓ Yes, impatient because I can spend the whole afternoon in the library just challenging math problems and in addition I really get angry with others.

这里“miss problem”应为复数形式“math problems”，因为表示多个问题。英语中名词的单复数要根据数量变化。

× Yes, impatient becauses I can spend the whole afternoon in the library just for challenging miss problem and in addition I really be angry with others.

✓ Yes, impatient because I can spend the whole afternoon in the library just challenging math problems and in addition I really get angry with others.

动词“challenge”在这里应使用现在分词形式“challenging”作状语，表示正在进行的动作。

× I always can understand others in.

✓ I can always understand others.

“always”应放在情态动词“can”后面，且句尾“in”无意义，应去掉。

× Most of the time and patience, but traffic James make me feel impatient.

✓ Most of the time I am patient, but traffic jams make me feel impatient.

“traffic James”应为复数“traffic jams”，表示多个交通堵塞。

× Most of the time and patience, but traffic James make me feel impatient.

✓ Most of the time I am patient, but traffic jams make me feel impatient.

句子缺少主语和谓语，结构不完整，应补充完整。

× Sings Emma, person who dislike BB needs for appointment or having class which make me feel stressful.

✓ For example, some people who dislike being late for appointments or having classes make me feel stressed.

“Sings Emma”应为“for example”，“person”应为复数“people”，“needs”应为“need”，“make”应为“makes”或改为复数主语。

× Sings Emma, person who dislike BB needs for appointment or having class which make me feel stressful.

✓ For example, some people who dislike being late for appointments or having classes make me feel stressed.

“needs for appointment”中“for”用法错误，应去掉或改为“being late for appointments”。

× Sings Emma, person who dislike BB needs for appointment or having class which make me feel stressful.

✓ For example, some people who dislike being late for appointments or having classes make me feel stressed.

“stressful”形容事物，这里应使用“stressed”形容人的感受。

× But if I spent a long time on doing sports which made me feel so tired and unhappy.

✓ But if I spend a long time doing sports, it makes me feel so tired and unhappy.

条件句中应使用一般现在时“spend”，主句用一般现在时“makes”，保持时态一致。

× But if I spent a long time on doing sports which made me feel so tired and unhappy.

✓ But if I spend a long time doing sports, it makes me feel so tired and unhappy.

“on doing sports”中“on”多余，应直接用“doing sports”。

× I need to tell theme every state about it.

✓ I need to tell them every step about it.

“theme”应为“them”，且“state”应为“step”，表示每一步。

× Yes, I'm becauses my job is a mess teacher.

✓ Yes, I am, because my job is a math teacher.

“becauses”拼写错误，应为“because”；“mess teacher”应为“math teacher”。

× MM more patient to them when I was a child because when I was young I just allowed to focus on my starting and I don't need to worry about other things.

✓ I was more patient when I was a child because when I was young I was just allowed to focus on my studying and I didn't need to worry about other things.

“MM”应为“I was”，“to them”多余；“starting”应为“studying”；时态应与过去时间一致。

× MM more patient to them when I was a child because when I was young I just allowed to focus on my starting and I don't need to worry about other things.

✓ I was more patient when I was a child because when I was young I was just allowed to focus on my studying and I didn't need to worry about other things.

描述过去的事情，动词应使用过去时态，如“was”，“didn't need”。