Patience— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答较自然且内容相关，但句子结构较简单，且缺少连接词使内容衔接不够流畅。建议使用更多连接词如“so”或“therefore”来增强逻辑性，并丰富词汇表达。

例: Yes, I consider myself a patient person. For instance, if someone is late for a meeting, I don't get angry; instead, I use that time to learn new words on my phone, so I make good use of the waiting period.

提案: 回答内容不清晰，语法错误较多，表达混乱。建议明确表达原因，使用正确的语法和词汇，并用连接词使句子连贯。

例: I feel impatient when I have to wait for a long time, especially during long travels. Also, if something important to me is lost or someone close passes away, it makes me feel very upset and impatient.

提案: 回答表达了观点，但语法和用词有误，且缺少连接词。建议改进语法，使用更准确的词汇，并用连接词连接句子。

例: I feel very excited when I have to do something for a long time because I always need a goal to pursue. Otherwise, I get bored and feel lost.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和用词不当，且表达不够连贯。建议使用正确的句式，避免重复，并用连接词使表达更流畅。

例: Actually, I don't have a job right now because I am a student. However, I still need to be patient since I have many exams, and I must stay calm and work hard to pass them.

提案: 回答不够清晰，语法和表达错误较多，影响理解。建议简化句子，使用正确语法，并清楚表达观点。

例: Definitely, I am more patient now than when I was a child. As I learn more about the world, I understand things better, which helps me stay calm in difficult situations.

× The big traveled could makes me feel impatient.

✓ The big travel could make me feel impatient.

这里的 'traveled' 应为名词 'travel'，且 'could' 后应接动词原形 'make'，表示可能性。原句中 'traveled' 是错误的形式，且 'makes' 与 'could' 搭配不当。

× If some of my relevant died.

✓ If some of my relatives died.

单词 'relevant' 用错了，正确应为 'relatives'（亲戚）。此外，句子结构正确，使用过去式 'died' 合适。

× I would feel impatient 'cause it really makes me feel depressed.

✓ I would feel impatient because it really makes me feel depressed.

口语中 'cause' 是 'because' 的缩写，但书面语中应使用完整形式 'because'，更正式且规范。

× I'm a person that need something to pursue.

✓ I'm a person that needs something to pursue.

关系代词 'that' 指代单数 'person'，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式 'needs'。

× At a job, I'm a student.

✓ In a job, I'm a student.

表示在某个职位或工作中，通常用介词 'in'，而不是 'at'。

× I have lot of exams.

✓ I have a lot of exams.

'lot' 前需要冠词 'a'，构成短语 'a lot of'，表示大量。

× I have to be patient and do my best to to pass them.

✓ I have to be patient and do my best to pass them.

句中 'to' 重复，应删除多余的一个。

× Definitely, I get more patient now.

✓ Definitely, I am more patient now.

'get' 在这里用法不当，表达状态变化应使用 'am'，且 'patient' 是形容词，需用系动词 'am'。

× Be 'cause nothing will.

✓ Because nothing will.

'Because' 被错误拆分为 'Be 'cause'，应写作完整单词 'Because'。

× National will impact your mind.

✓ Nothing will impact your mind.

单词 'National' 用错，应为 'Nothing'，表示没有什么会影响你的心态。