Patience— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时语法和表达不够自然，句子结构混乱，建议简化句子并使用更准确的表达。可以先直接回答问题，然后用具体例子支持。

例: Yes, I consider myself a patient person. For example, I stay calm during emergencies and am very patient with my young son.

提案: 回答中断断续续，表达不连贯，建议使用连贯的句子并用连接词使内容更流畅。

例: I feel impatient when I have to wait for a friend who is more than half an hour late, or when I am stuck in heavy traffic.

提案: 表达不清晰且有语法错误，建议简化句子，明确表达感受，并使用连接词。

例: At first, I might be interested in doing something for a long time, but after a while, I start to feel impatient because it becomes boring and tedious.

提案: 句子结构复杂且有语法错误，建议分成两句表达，使用正确的介词和代词。

例: Yes, my job as a tour guide requires a lot of patience. I meet people from different backgrounds and need to explain things clearly to avoid complaints.

提案: 回答较为完整，但时态使用不准确，建议注意时态一致性并简化表达。

例: Yes, I am more patient now than when I was a child. For example, I used to want toys immediately, but now I am more patient, especially since having my son.

× Yes, I think that I am a quite a patient person 'cause.

✓ Yes, I think that I am quite a patient person because.

句中“a quite a patient person”中“a”重复使用，且“quite”前不应有冠词。应去掉第一个“a”，并将口语缩写'cause改为正式的because。

× In my daily communications are obtaining, stay calm when there's some emergency happens and I'm quite patient to my little son.

✓ In my daily communications, I stay calm when there is an emergency, and I'm quite patient with my little son.

原句结构混乱，缺少主语，动词使用不当。应补充主语“I”，将“are obtaining”改为合适表达，去掉多余的“happens”，并将“patient to”改为“patient with”。

× Well, there is some other point if situations which I will feel.

✓ Well, there are some other situations in which I feel impatient.

“there is some other point if situations”表达不清且语法错误，应改为“there are some other situations”，主谓一致且表达明确。

× such as from waiting for a friend who is slated for over half an hour and I was.

✓ such as waiting for a friend who is late for over half an hour, and I was

“slated”应为“late”，且“from waiting”多余，应直接用“such as waiting”。

× Stuck in the traffic congestion's.

✓ stuck in traffic congestion.

“congestion's”错误使用了所有格，应为不可数名词“congestion”，不加复数或所有格。

× Well, when I have to do something for a long time, I at the beginning maybe I will show my interest towards it.

✓ Well, when I have to do something for a long time, at the beginning I may show interest in it.

句子结构混乱，“I at the beginning maybe I will”重复且不通顺，应调整为“at the beginning I may”。

× However, after sometimes I feel impatient on the may lose temper 'cause I think that is so boring.

✓ However, after some time, I feel impatient and may lose my temper because I think it is so boring.

“after sometimes”应为“after some time”，“impatient on the may lose temper”结构错误，应改为“impatient and may lose my temper”。

× Any tedious?

✓ It's tedious.

“Any tedious?”不符合英语表达习惯，应改为完整句子“It's tedious.”。

× Yes, since I am a tour guide and I have to meet people from divergent backgrounds with different personalities so I have to be quite patient to explain there are questions or else they will complain me.

✓ Yes, since I am a tour guide and I have to meet people from diverse backgrounds with different personalities, so I have to be quite patient to explain their questions, or else they will complain about me.

“divergent”用词不当，应为“diverse”；“patient to explain there are questions”应为“patient to explain their questions”；“complain me”应为“complain about me”。

× Well, I think that is yes.

✓ Well, I think that is true.

“that is yes”表达不正确，应改为“that is true”或“yes”。

× When I was a child, I'm quite impatient.

✓ When I was a child, I was quite impatient.

时态错误，描述过去应使用过去时“was”，而非现在时“I'm”。

× For instance, if I want a toy, I wanted it immediately.

✓ For instance, if I wanted a toy, I wanted it immediately.

条件句中时态应一致，假设过去情况应使用过去时“wanted”。

× However, now as I grow older, I think I'm quite patient, especially after I got my son.

✓ However, now as I have grown older, I think I'm quite patient, especially after I got my son.

“as I grow older”应使用完成时“as I have grown older”表示到现在的变化。