Patience— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时应避免语法错误和表达不清，如“finite interesting”应为“find interesting”。建议简洁明了地表达观点，并用连接词使句子更流畅。

例: I consider myself a patient person, especially when I care about something. However, if the matter is unimportant to me, I tend to become impatient quickly.

提案: 回答中存在语法和表达混乱，建议使用更准确的词汇和句式，避免重复，且用连接词组织句子，使表达更清晰。

例: Technical issues with my smartphone or computer make me impatient, especially when they are not fixed promptly. Also, when I ask someone to stop doing something and they continue, it frustrates me.

提案: 回答不连贯且含糊，建议先明确表达观点，再用具体例子支持，避免语法错误和不相关内容。

例: I don't mind doing something for a long time if I can see the results and achieve a goal. However, I get bored and impatient with repetitive tasks that have no clear purpose.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不完整。建议使用完整句子，清晰说明原因，并用连接词使内容连贯。

例: Yes, my job as a salesman requires a lot of patience because communicating with clients can be a slow and complicated process. Also, I need to be careful to avoid mistakes, especially with technical details.

提案: 回答表达不清，语法和逻辑混乱。建议先明确观点，再用具体原因支持，避免无关内容。

例: Yes, I am more patient now than when I was a child because I have learned to consider others and handle situations calmly as I grow older.

× if I care about something or finite interesting

✓ if I care about something or find it interesting

这里的 'finite interesting' 是错误的表达，应该是 'find it interesting'，表示“觉得它有趣”。这是单复数和词形错误，需要用动词 'find' 来表达感受。

× if it's something I don't really care but I tend to be impatient quickly.

✓ if it's something I don't really care about, I tend to be impatient quickly.

句子缺少介词 'about'，导致结构不完整。正确表达是 'care about something'，表示关心某事。

× Like some problems on my smarter phones or computers, some technical problems, it's not fixed yet and it kind of solve my problems or something repeatly.

✓ Like some problems on my smartphone or computer, some technical problems, they are not fixed yet and they kind of solve my problems or something repeatedly.

'phones' 应为单数 'phone'，'it's' 应为复数 'they are'，动词 'solve' 也应对应复数形式 'solve'。此外，'repeatly' 拼写错误，应为 'repeatedly'。

× Like I told the person, don't make, don't do something, he or she still do it and they will make me very angry and impatient.

✓ Like I told the person not to do something, he or she still does it and it makes me very angry and impatient.

'don't make, don't do something' 结构不正确，应改为 'not to do something'。'he or she still do' 主谓不一致，应为 'he or she still does'。'they will make me' 指代不清，应改为 'it makes me'。

× If the thing I'm going to do for a long time, I can see the result and it has a goal and I can achieve something from that thing, I would like to do it If that thing is really repeat like a boring label work I don't have.

✓ If the thing I'm going to do takes a long time, I can see the result and it has a goal, and I can achieve something from it, I would like to do it. But if that thing is really repetitive like boring labor work, I don't have too much patience to do it anymore.

句子结构混乱，缺少连词和标点，'repeat' 应为形容词 'repetitive'，'label work' 应为 'labor work'，'anime before' 拼写错误，应为 'anymore'。需要分句并调整表达使其通顺。

× Yes, my job is a salesman and it really requires patience because our communicate with your clients is a long process, sometimes is very slow and complicated and also I need to avoid the miss make mistakes with some technical things or something related to shaping or.

✓ Yes, my job is a salesman and it really requires patience because our communication with clients is a long process, sometimes very slow and complicated. Also, I need to avoid making mistakes with some technical things or something related to shaping.

'communicate' 应为名词 'communication'，'your clients' 应为 'clients'，'miss make mistakes' 结构错误，应为 'making mistakes'。句子末尾不完整，需补充完整。

× Yes, I am more patient currently because mom was tired, I don't have any consideration about how the things will go in, but now I'm entering into the society must be patient to consider about others appear news and got myself to swap over.

✓ Yes, I am more patient currently because when I was a child, I didn't have any consideration about how things would go, but now I'm entering society and must be patient to consider others and adapt myself.

时态混用，'mom was tired' 语义不清，应为 'when I was a child'。'don't have' 应为过去时 'didn't have'。'must be patient to consider about others appear news and got myself to swap over' 结构混乱，需简化为 'must be patient to consider others and adapt myself'。