Patience— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Are you a patient person?
受験者
Unfortunately, I tend to be quite impatient, especially while I'm dealing with this client. Have those really unrealistic? Expectations of the case outcomes.
試験官
What is it that makes you feel impatient?
受験者
To be honest, the human stupidity makes me really impatient, such as a client asked me to. Offer them completely victory of the case, but it in fact they actually did something wrong.
試験官
How do you feel when you have to do something for a long time?
受験者
I feel frustrated while I have to do 1 task for a long time, especially while such task are really tedious and among day.
試験官
Does your job require you to be patient?
受験者
Yes, I'm a lawyer in Sencha. Lee is. Service business I'm should be patient to my client or otherwise client client were compliant.
試験官
Are you more patient now than when you were a child?
受験者
I think I lost my patience is through out of my legal practice. I became less patient compared to. One young girl.
評価
総合
Part 1
Are you a patient person?
スコア: 50.0提案: 回答不够自然，语法和表达存在错误，且内容不够连贯。建议简化句子结构，避免语法错误，并且直接回答问题。
例: I am not very patient, especially when clients have unrealistic expectations about their cases.
What is it that makes you feel impatient?
スコア: 40.0提案: 表达不清晰，语法错误较多，内容重复且不连贯。建议使用更准确的词汇，简洁表达原因，并避免负面词汇。
例: I feel impatient when clients expect a complete victory even though they have made mistakes.
How do you feel when you have to do something for a long time?
スコア: 45.0提案: 语法错误明显，表达不流畅，句子结构混乱。建议使用简单句表达感受，并具体说明原因。
例: I feel frustrated when I have to do a tedious task for a long time during the day.
Does your job require you to be patient?
スコア: 35.0提案: 回答内容混乱，语法和词汇错误严重，信息不完整。建议简洁明了地说明职业和耐心的重要性。
例: Yes, as a lawyer, I need to be patient with my clients to provide good service.
Are you more patient now than when you were a child?
スコア: 40.0提案: 表达不清晰，语法错误多，逻辑不连贯。建议直接比较现在和过去的耐心程度，并说明原因。
例: I am less patient now than when I was a child because my legal work is very stressful.
文法
× Have those really unrealistic? Expectations of the case outcomes.
✓ Are those really unrealistic expectations of the case outcomes?
原句结构混乱，疑问句应以助动词开头，且不应有多余的标点符号。建议将句子调整为正确的疑问句结构。
× To be honest, the human stupidity makes me really impatient, such as a client asked me to. Offer them completely victory of the case, but it in fact they actually did something wrong.
✓ To be honest, human stupidity makes me really impatient, such as when a client asks me to offer them a complete victory in the case, but in fact, they actually did something wrong.
原句中“a client asked me to.”断句错误，且“the human stupidity”中“the”使用不当，应去掉。代词和时态也需调整以符合语境。
× I feel frustrated while I have to do 1 task for a long time, especially while such task are really tedious and among day.
✓ I feel frustrated when I have to do one task for a long time, especially when such tasks are really tedious and all day long.
“task”应为复数“tasks”，且“among day”表达错误，应为“all day long”表示整天。数字“1”应写为“one”。
× Yes, I'm a lawyer in Sencha. Lee is. Service business I'm should be patient to my client or otherwise client client were compliant.
✓ Yes, I'm a lawyer in Sencha. Lee is a service business. I should be patient with my clients, or otherwise the clients would complain.
原句中代词使用混乱，句子断裂，且“client client were compliant”重复且用词错误，应为“clients would complain”。
× I think I lost my patience is through out of my legal practice. I became less patient compared to. One young girl.
✓ I think I lost my patience throughout my legal practice. I became less patient compared to when I was a young girl.
“is through out of”错误，应为“throughout”。“compared to. One young girl”断句错误，应补充完整比较对象和时态。
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