Patience— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时应更自然流畅，避免重复和语法错误。可以直接回答问题，并用具体例子支持观点。

例: Yes, I consider myself a patient person. For instance, when I learn new skills, I take my time to practice carefully until I master them.

提案: 回答应更连贯，使用连接词，并具体说明原因。避免简单罗列。

例: I usually feel impatient when things are disorganized or when my schedule is disrupted because it makes me anxious and stressed.

提案: 回答不连贯且含糊，应清晰表达感受并使用完整句子。

例: When I have to do something for a long time, I try to stay focused and remind myself of the goal to keep motivated.

提案: 回答应更具体，避免模糊表达，说明工作中具体需要耐心的方面。

例: Yes, my job requires patience, especially when dealing with customers who have many questions or concerns.

提案: 回答应更连贯，使用连接词，并具体说明原因。

例: I don't think I'm more patient now than when I was a child because adult responsibilities often make me feel stressed and less patient.

× I feels like when I grow up.

✓ I feel like when I grow up.

主语是第一人称单数“I”，谓语动词应使用原形“feel”，而不是“feels”。“feels”用于第三人称单数。

× My parents and my friends, they said that I'm a patient person, like in some daily life I will be patient to do something well.

✓ My parents and my friends said that I'm a patient person. In daily life, I am patient when doing something well.

句中“they”重复指代“My parents and my friends”，造成冗余，应去掉。句子结构不清晰，建议拆分并调整表达，使意思更明确。

× First of all, I will feel like I need to keep going and I need to. Received the goal that I. Replying to myself. Jeff.

✓ First of all, I feel like I need to keep going and achieve the goal. I keep encouraging myself.

原句结构混乱，断句不当，导致意思不明。应调整句子结构，使表达连贯完整。

× Sometimes if I have a lot of messy stuff to settle out, I won't be patient.

✓ Sometimes if I have a lot of messy stuff to settle, I won't be patient.

“settle out”用法不当，正确表达应为“settle”，表示处理、解决。

× I think is the messy stuff or the wrong schedule.

✓ I think it is the messy stuff or the wrong schedule.

句子缺少主语“it”，导致语法错误。应补充主语使句子完整。